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英语作文修改In our school,cafeteria provides fast food every day,s

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英语作文修改
In our school,cafeteria provides fast food every day,so that students who eat lunch at school have no choices except they bring lunch from home.However,for the health,we need to avoid eating fast food or reducing the times to get food from outside.Trying to make dinner at home,do not be lazy for clean dishes and table; in a positive way,it helps you loose weight.In the daily life,do more exercises; it is the best way to keep health.Pay more attention on your own body,care your body is love your life.
英语作文修改In our school,cafeteria provides fast food every day,s
have no choices except they bring lunch from home:一般是
have no choices but.,还有后面的they 要去掉.
it is the best way to keep health ,建议改成 which is the best way to keep health.这样跟前面的句子联系紧凑.
care your body is love your life--》care your body is cherishing your life.(就算是用love,也要改成loving)