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我明天要参加英语演讲比赛,写了一篇稿子,请高手主要看下有没有什么语法问题,并请详细列举出来并帮我改正,如果可能的话也可以帮我滴文章润润色,
China Talent Show
Today,I want to talk something about China Talent Show!That night,the finals game
of China Talent Show was held in Shanghai Stadium.But I'm really poor,so I watched
it on TV.At first,the talent from England and American performed some excellent
plays.After that,it was the show time for China's talent.They all played a short
program.In my opinion,Keysos is the best one,and I also loved Zhangfeng Xi.Why?
Because Keysos song raps very well while Zhangfeng Xi is humorous
enough!Finally,the angels who lost wings named LiuWei won the game.He defeated
Keysos and Zhang.Because of an accident,he lost his arms,so he used his feet to
play the piano.The music he played names
China Talent Show
Today,I want to talk something about China Talent Show!That night,the finals game
of China Talent Show was held in Shanghai Stadium.But I'm really poor,so I watched
it on TV.At first,the talent from England and American performed some excellent
plays.After that,it was the show time for China's talent.They all played a short
program.In my opinion,Keysos is the best one,and I also loved Zhangfeng Xi.Why?
Because Keysos song raps very well while Zhangfeng Xi is humorous
enough!Finally,the angels who lost wings named LiuWei won the game.He defeated
Keysos and Zhang.Because of an accident,he lost his arms,so he used his feet to
play the piano.The music he played names
China Talent Show
Today,I want to talk something about (the) China Talent Show!The other night,China Talent Show finals was held at the Shanghai Stadium.But I didn't have the luxury for a ticket to attend the live show ,so I watched it on TV like millions of others.
The night started with the talents from England and America performing some excellent plays.After that,it was show time for China's talents.They all played short programs.In my opinion,Keysos was the best one,and I also loved Zhangfeng Xi.Why?Because Keysos sang raps very well while Zhangfeng Xi was very humorous and funny!Finally,Liu Wei,an angel without wings,became the winner.He defeated Keysos and Zhang.He lost his arms in an accident,so he used his feet to play the piano.
The music he played was "You're beautiful".Oh,how great he played!What I want to say more is that if you give your best shot,you'll be the greatest talent in your life!
帮你润色和修改了一下,这样讲起来就会更好一些,一些小小的语法错误也修改了,you are also a talent!
Today,I want to talk something about (the) China Talent Show!The other night,China Talent Show finals was held at the Shanghai Stadium.But I didn't have the luxury for a ticket to attend the live show ,so I watched it on TV like millions of others.
The night started with the talents from England and America performing some excellent plays.After that,it was show time for China's talents.They all played short programs.In my opinion,Keysos was the best one,and I also loved Zhangfeng Xi.Why?Because Keysos sang raps very well while Zhangfeng Xi was very humorous and funny!Finally,Liu Wei,an angel without wings,became the winner.He defeated Keysos and Zhang.He lost his arms in an accident,so he used his feet to play the piano.
The music he played was "You're beautiful".Oh,how great he played!What I want to say more is that if you give your best shot,you'll be the greatest talent in your life!
帮你润色和修改了一下,这样讲起来就会更好一些,一些小小的语法错误也修改了,you are also a talent!
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