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A person you know is planning to move to your town or city.What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city?Why?Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
Well as you know i’m living in China Haikou.My hometown is a seaside city .There are mangy gergrous beaches in my city.If my friend come to my hometown ,i will lead him to visit these atrcative beaches.He will like it.And he will like go shopping in the jiefang west road.There is the finalcial centre of haikou.You canfind lots of stores in here.You can enjoy yourself in here for example you can loosen youself in the many different bars ,you can buy something new in the stores.After jiefang west road,I think my friend will like the ever green park.It is the park that many haikou people like visiting,please immgine this picture.There are many kites in the sky,kids play with each other under the tree.The old play Taiji in the square.What a peaceful place!I think he will like it.
It is necessary that you would face some trouble in you whole life.Just like the proverb”Every cion has two sides.”It is ture of living in haikou .You may enjoy the vivida scenary but there still are something will borther you when you live in haikou.
As you konw hainan island is the second largest island of China.And it is famous as the ionternational tourusim island now.So that means traffic jam is comming.You may have to wait in traffic jam for 30 min or more.That will bo suffer.But a good new is coming,the govrment will invest more money into the transfortation.In other words ,this problem will be solved.And another worry thing is the price of goods.You may be surprised with the goods price in haikou.Absolutetly,because you are in the international touriusm ialand.You may have to pay more money to live.But the price of own house is acceptable.You shouldn’t be anxious of it.
To choose to live in a complete new city will be a big challenge,a interesting advanture.I think my friend will be acustomed to live in the haikou and i believe that he will acquaint to live in this city.
A person you know is planning to move to your town or city.What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city?Why?Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
Well as you know i’m living in China Haikou.My hometown is a seaside city .There are mangy gergrous beaches in my city.If my friend come to my hometown ,i will lead him to visit these atrcative beaches.He will like it.And he will like go shopping in the jiefang west road.There is the finalcial centre of haikou.You canfind lots of stores in here.You can enjoy yourself in here for example you can loosen youself in the many different bars ,you can buy something new in the stores.After jiefang west road,I think my friend will like the ever green park.It is the park that many haikou people like visiting,please immgine this picture.There are many kites in the sky,kids play with each other under the tree.The old play Taiji in the square.What a peaceful place!I think he will like it.
It is necessary that you would face some trouble in you whole life.Just like the proverb”Every cion has two sides.”It is ture of living in haikou .You may enjoy the vivida scenary but there still are something will borther you when you live in haikou.
As you konw hainan island is the second largest island of China.And it is famous as the ionternational tourusim island now.So that means traffic jam is comming.You may have to wait in traffic jam for 30 min or more.That will bo suffer.But a good new is coming,the govrment will invest more money into the transfortation.In other words ,this problem will be solved.And another worry thing is the price of goods.You may be surprised with the goods price in haikou.Absolutetly,because you are in the international touriusm ialand.You may have to pay more money to live.But the price of own house is acceptable.You shouldn’t be anxious of it.
To choose to live in a complete new city will be a big challenge,a interesting advanture.I think my friend will be acustomed to live in the haikou and i believe that he will acquaint to live in this city.
I’m living in Haikou in China.It is a seaside city with many gorgeous beaches.If my friend comes to my hometown,I always invite him to these attractive places.He will also like Jiefang West Road,the financial centre of Haikou,where there are lots of stores and bars.The Evergreen Park is another good choice.There are many kites in the sky,kids play with each other on the grass and the old men and women play Taiji in the square.What a peaceful place!
\x05The proverb goes,“Every coin has two sides.” There is also something that will bother everyone in Haikou.The traffic jam is an obvious disadvantage.As you may have known,Haikou is the second largest island in China and is famous for international tourism.My friend may suffer the traffic jam,stuck in the traffic for more than 30 minutes.Fortunately,the government will invest more money into the transportation.In other words,this problem will be solved.My friend,also,will be astonished by the high price.The city maintains a higher living standard than many other cities.But the prices of houses are acceptable.He shouldn’t be anxious of it.
To choose to live in a complete new city will be a big challenge,an interesting adventure.I think my friend will be accustomed to living in Haikou.I believe that he will acquaint to this city.
再问： 你觉得这篇文章能得多少分在托福中
\x05The proverb goes,“Every coin has two sides.” There is also something that will bother everyone in Haikou.The traffic jam is an obvious disadvantage.As you may have known,Haikou is the second largest island in China and is famous for international tourism.My friend may suffer the traffic jam,stuck in the traffic for more than 30 minutes.Fortunately,the government will invest more money into the transportation.In other words,this problem will be solved.My friend,also,will be astonished by the high price.The city maintains a higher living standard than many other cities.But the prices of houses are acceptable.He shouldn’t be anxious of it.
To choose to live in a complete new city will be a big challenge,an interesting adventure.I think my friend will be accustomed to living in Haikou.I believe that he will acquaint to this city.
再问： 你觉得这篇文章能得多少分在托福中