英语翻译申请留学建筑学 找的中介 他们的人不会用专业的英语翻译这些 原文：这是我临摹的一副钢笔画,用时两个半小时.作画时

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申请留学建筑学 找的中介 他们的人不会用专业的英语翻译这些
原文：这是我临摹的一副钢笔画,用时两个半小时.作画时我首先观察了原作品,在理解他的画面构图、阴影以及画面中的虚实对比后开始临摹.首先用简单的线条概括了作品的轮廓,然后再描绘建筑的整体结构,最后进入深入刻画.这幅临摹作业构图准确,建筑物有体积感,明暗对比明显,虚实对比较好的概括了所观察到的建筑物.但是在用笔方面,线条不够流畅,过于杂乱,建筑物的细节不够明确,绘画过程中对建筑物的细节处理不是很恰当.在今后的绘画中,应该着重线条的运用,同时在画画前仔细分析所绘物体,思考出最好的发现方式来刻画它的细节.
这是一座由乾久美子建筑设计事务所设计的商用建筑,坐落与日本东京的一个城市花园中心,由日本新锐建筑师设计,属于现代主义建筑.该建筑与2009年11月竣工,采用混凝土结构,.该建筑的建筑面积和高度都很小,但是却给人一种稳固感,比例协调.建筑内部空间因为合适的比例显得高大空旷.立面处理也很明快,给人一种清新自然的感觉.在经济快速发展的今天,人们逐渐开始追求奢华,内心变的浮躁不安.然而却忽略了简单的生活也可以给人们的生活带来愉悦.日比谷花坛简洁明快的外表和明了的功能使用,使参观者内心得意平静,这正是我希望的建筑给人们带来的体验.
画面的透视线指向远方休闲椅上的人群,突出了建筑的休息功能.图片较好的反映了建筑材料柔和亲近的特点.建筑物和空白的天空具有虚实变化.
画面整体色调偏红,突出了灯笼的喜庆特征,同时斜向的透视线将视野自然引向远方的出口,突出了古街狭长的特点.右上角绿色灯光与灯笼散发的红色暖色光行程对比,
具有趣味性.
画面采用对称的构图方式,将古建筑讲求对称和谐的特点凸显出来,同时窗内的灯光和暗墙形成了强烈的明暗对比.
画面构图平庸,未能将旧房改造的气息表达出来,画面单板,没有虚实对比.

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This is my copy of a pen drawing, two and a half hours of use. Painting when I first observed the original works, to understand his picture composition, shadow and screen comparison of the actual situation after copying. Summarizes the outline of the work first with simple lines, then describe the overall structure of the building, and finally into the depth portrayed. Accurate composition of this piece of copy operations, building a sense of volume, chiaroscuro, the actual situation better summarizes the observed buildings. However, in a pen, the line is not smooth, too messy, the details of the building is not clear enough, the process of painting the building details of the deal is not very appropriate. Should focus on the use of lines in the future of painting, painting a careful analysis of the painted object, thinking best to find a way to characterize its details.
This is a by Japan's cutting-edge architects design firm designs commercial buildings, is located with a city garden center in Tokyo, Japan, by Japan's cutting-edge architects to belong to the modernist architecture. The building was completed in November 2009, the use of concrete structures. The construction of the building size and height are small, but it gives us a solid sense of well proportioned. The building interior space because the appropriate proportion of tall open. The facade treatment is also very bright, giving a fresh and clean feeling. The rapid economic development, people gradually began the pursuit of luxury, the heart becomes restless. However, ignores the simple life can also bring pleasure to people's lives. Hibiya Kadan simple and neat appearance, and to understand the functional use of the visitors heart proud and calm, this building is what I hope to bring the experience.
The perspective lines of the screen pointing to the distant leisure chair of the crowd, highlighting the rest of the building. Picture better reflects the characteristics of building materials and soft close. Buildings and blank sky with the actual situation changes.
Overall reddish color of the screen, highlight the festive features of the lantern, while the diagonal lines of perspective view naturally leads to distant export, highlighting the ancient street and narrow features. Upper right corner of the green lights and red lanterns distributed warm light stroke contrast, and it also has fun.
Screen using the symmetrical composition highlights the emphasis on symmetry and harmonious features of the ancient buildings, and window lighting and dark walls formed a strong contrast.
Picture composition mediocre, not out of the renovation breath expression, the picture veneer, there is no actual situation compared.