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看看我这篇文章有没有毛病
Bed luck
Today is English exam.This is easy to pass it.But l misread the title.I’ll lose grade in half .I am very unhappy to it.English is my best subject so I can’t fail!However,l’ll continue to stady hard.Because it is only my life’s trouble .I believe l can successful.Although l’ll be hardship ,I can’t give up!I believe l can achieve my dream!
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看看我这篇文章有没有毛病
我是初三的学生.额...看了你的作文觉得有点不通吧.稍微改改.
开头I have an English exam today.I think it's easy to pass.
"English is my best subject so I can’t fail!"改改.My favorite subject is English,so I think I can't fail.
" believe l can successful."这个有点错误.给你用另一句.I believe in myself.I can be successful.
虽然我不知道我能不能帮到你.但是 这三句改的是我比较有把握的句子.
I believe in you .Hope you can be good at English