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请帮我检查和修正以下我的文章句子 请会英语的帮帮我
看看我写的main idea 行不行
我写的句子 里面有没有 ( claim & evidennce & analysis) 阿 请帮我看看吧 ><
顺便帮我把中文的那段 帮英文
The main idea expressed by the love poem # 1 by Sandra Cisneros is a boys and girls in a relationship with different kinds of emotions ,love is an adventure and risky.
In this love poem by Sandra Cisneros,the author give us so many idea about the different meaning of love.Specifically she shows that love could be like crazy and dangerous.
比如第一句red flag暗指危险,可以想像恋人之间的关系里会有什麼危险,可以结合後面的词来想像：女人、化学品也许是指有毒和容易爆炸不稳定的、斧头也许是指会伤人或沉重、受伤的大拇指笨或是不怕痛.
作者运用了很多单字来比喻两个恋人之间的关系和矛盾
看看我写的main idea 行不行
我写的句子 里面有没有 ( claim & evidennce & analysis) 阿 请帮我看看吧 ><
顺便帮我把中文的那段 帮英文
The main idea expressed by the love poem # 1 by Sandra Cisneros is a boys and girls in a relationship with different kinds of emotions ,love is an adventure and risky.
In this love poem by Sandra Cisneros,the author give us so many idea about the different meaning of love.Specifically she shows that love could be like crazy and dangerous.
比如第一句red flag暗指危险,可以想像恋人之间的关系里会有什麼危险,可以结合後面的词来想像：女人、化学品也许是指有毒和容易爆炸不稳定的、斧头也许是指会伤人或沉重、受伤的大拇指笨或是不怕痛.
作者运用了很多单字来比喻两个恋人之间的关系和矛盾
英文句子有些语法瑕疵.修改后：
The main idea expressed in love poem # 1 by Sandra Cisneros is a boy-and-girl relationship with different kinds of emotions and love is adventurous and risky.
In this love poem by Sandra Cisneros,the author gives us so many ideas about the different meanings of love.Specifically she shows that love could be crazy and dangerous.
我在网上找了一些 ideas 给您参考：
The author applies many single words and items to correlate the relationship and paradoxes between the two lovers.
Redflag—something to watch out for,a warning.Is she dangerous?
All copper—why copper?It’s cold,turns green?Good conductor of electricity and heat.She’s hot,electrified,passionate,emotional,responsive.
Chemical—chemical reaction,they have chemistry together
An axe and a bruised thumb—Is he clumsy?He’s aggressive,breaks or splits things.
Pas de deux—ballet dance for two .Requires grace and coordination,unlikely for an electrified and dangerous woman and a clumsy wild man.
Nitro etc.—unexpected list of things,used to describe relationship?Nitro is explosive,Egypt
is foreign,exotic,timeless (pyramids),snake is associated with evil,temptation or a phallic symbol?Museum could mean their love is rare,valuable,worth showing off.A zoo…are they animals on display?
Connoisseurs and Commandoes—use of opposite terms.One is refined,one is reckless.Opposite personalities?Paradoxes
You my religion—obviously very involved with this person.Does she worship him?If so
that’s a little disturbing.
Wicked nun—more religious imagery,creates ideas of forbidden pleasure.
The main idea expressed in love poem # 1 by Sandra Cisneros is a boy-and-girl relationship with different kinds of emotions and love is adventurous and risky.
In this love poem by Sandra Cisneros,the author gives us so many ideas about the different meanings of love.Specifically she shows that love could be crazy and dangerous.
我在网上找了一些 ideas 给您参考：
The author applies many single words and items to correlate the relationship and paradoxes between the two lovers.
Redflag—something to watch out for,a warning.Is she dangerous?
All copper—why copper?It’s cold,turns green?Good conductor of electricity and heat.She’s hot,electrified,passionate,emotional,responsive.
Chemical—chemical reaction,they have chemistry together
An axe and a bruised thumb—Is he clumsy?He’s aggressive,breaks or splits things.
Pas de deux—ballet dance for two .Requires grace and coordination,unlikely for an electrified and dangerous woman and a clumsy wild man.
Nitro etc.—unexpected list of things,used to describe relationship?Nitro is explosive,Egypt
is foreign,exotic,timeless (pyramids),snake is associated with evil,temptation or a phallic symbol?Museum could mean their love is rare,valuable,worth showing off.A zoo…are they animals on display?
Connoisseurs and Commandoes—use of opposite terms.One is refined,one is reckless.Opposite personalities?Paradoxes
You my religion—obviously very involved with this person.Does she worship him?If so
that’s a little disturbing.
Wicked nun—more religious imagery,creates ideas of forbidden pleasure.