帮忙检查一下这篇文章（故事）的语法错误Once upon a time,In the forest,there was

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帮忙检查一下这篇文章（故事）的语法错误Once upon a time,In the forest,there was a fast rabbit.
Once upon a time,In the forest,there was a fast rabbit.He liked to raced other animals.He always wins."I am very fast," he said."I can win any race."
One day,the rabbit saw a turtle."You are so slow.I am faster than you," he said."Do you want to race me?" "Yes," said the turtle."Ha,ha.It will be easy to win," laughed the rabbit."You will lose.Your legs are too short." "Tomorrow we will have a race," said the rabbit.All of the animals were excited.They want to see the race."The turtle will lose.He is too slow," they all said.
The race is comming.The turtle got up early in the morning.There are many animals at the race.The turtle walked to the starting line.All the animals laughed at him.
The rabbit was wait for the turtle."I will win," laughed the rabbit."I will try my best," said the turtle.
The race began.All of the other animals were excited."Go,go,go," they said.The rabbit ran very quickly.The turtle walked slowly.The rabbit turned around.The turtle waswalked so slowly."Ha,ha,you will never win this race," the rabbit said.The turtle was slower than the rabbit.The rabbit laughed at the turtle.
Then the rabbit saw a tree."The turtle is so slow.I will take a nap.I can still win the race," said the rabbit.He went to sleep under the tree.
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The turtle keeped walking.He was tired and his legs hurt.The rabbit was sleeped under the tree.The turtle quietly walked past the rabbit.He was very quiet because he didn't want to wake up the rabbit.
"I can do it!I can do it!" said the turtle."My legs are short and I am slow,but I can win this race."

He liked to raced other animals. He always wins. "I am very fast," he said. "I can win any race." 中raced改为race,. wins改为win. any race改为any races.
The rabbit was wait for the turtle中wait改为waiting.
The turtle waswalked so slowly中walk改为walking.slowly改为slow
The rabbit was sleeped under the tree.中改为sleeping
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