请老师按中考标准打分,满分15分,我能的多少分

Sharing Different people have different experiences, it can change our life .Mang People want to share their happy things with their best friends. When I was11 years oid Mg grandparents sent me a very lovelg dog , Lack.it was so cate that every one liked it Icalled mg best friends to piay with luck together, we had a good time that afternoon, but one day, Luck was lost ,I was too sad to goto school and helped me to find my frend didn't go to school, either ,she encoura ged me and helped me to find my dog I felt sud but warm, fiallg, we found it in my aunt'shome we were crying ,of course some time we need a people to share our feelings and we need friends, teachers,families to understand us .It you share evergthing with others, you must feel very hoppy! as a saying goes. It you have happiness to share with others, you will get double happiness. It you have troublo to share will others, you will reduce half of the trouble ,sharing, what a wonderfal quality! 请老师按中考标准,满分15分,我能的多少分

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Sharing
Different people have different experiences, it can change our life .
Mang People want to share their happy things (happiness) with their best friends.
When I was 11 years oid (old) (,) Mg (my) grandparents sent me a very lovelg dog , Lack (Luck).it (It)was so cate (cute) that everyone liked it (.)
Icalled mg best friends to piay (play) with luck together,
we had a good time that afternoon, but one day, Luck was lost,I was too sad to go to school and helped me to find (I found) my frend (friend) didn’t go to school, either,
she encouraged me and helped me to find my dog. I felt sud (sad) but warm,
fiallg (finally) , we found it in my aunt's home we were crying,
of course some time (sometimes) we need a people (someone) to share our feelings and we
need friends, teachers,families to understand us.
It (If) you share evergthing with others, you must feel very hoppy (happy)!
as (As)a saying goes. It you have happiness to share with others, you will get double happiness.
It (If) you have troublo (trouble) to share will others, you will reduce half of the trouble. Sharing,
what a wonderfal quality!
本文可得12分。括号中是老师修该后的。注意单词的拼写。
最终答案：略