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求批改,点出语法错误和更好的英语表达,另外为什么我一写起句子来一会儿往右偏,一会儿又不偏

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求批改,点出语法错误和更好的英语表达,另外为什么我一写起句子来一会儿往右偏,一会儿又不偏
求批改,点出语法错误和更好的英语表达,另外为什么我一写起句子来一会儿往右偏,一会儿又不偏
My Dream
It's true that everyone has a dream.My dream is to become the president of our country and make our country more powerful with better freedom.
I have been improving myself for the pass three years.For one thing,I have developed a habit of reading newspapers everyday,both local news and international news.This keeps me well informed and tells me what is happening in other countries.For another,I study hard and always keep a devoted heart for the country.
Of course,it is not easy for me to achieve the dream.There will be a long way to go.However,I will make more efforts and make myself qualified for the position.I believe that as long as I keep on,my dream will finally come true!