大家能看懂我写的英语吗?

大家能看懂我写的英语吗?
Let me introduce all the customer lists at my hand.
1.Redaction project.There are 6 states recipients list now,and we have run three times redaction on each state.The cold call on this project are changed by our America colleague—Bill.
2.Loan protect project.The project was stopped because of the D&B system failure.There are more than 200 customer list now.But we haven’t tested on the customer list by mass email.
3.Service bureau project.The customer list collection on the project is making preparations for mass mailing.
4.Chinese Community project.Max did cold call a few days ago.
5.Mortgage bank project.This is the attendee list who attended the 93 Annual MBA’s convention.The job was assigned by Michael.The list contains attendee name,company and contact.I think maybe the list could prepare for cold call.
有什么错的地方欢迎大家给我改
有错的地方帮我改阿 这是我给我们上级写的工作报告,我上级是外国人 我怕人家看不懂
中文意思：我把我手头上所有的list给您介绍一下
1.redaction project 目前已经搜集了6个州的list名单。这些州包括TX,CA,MN,UT,CO，已经对tx,ca,mn,ut 州各做了3次的redaction.这方面的cold call是由我们美国同事Bill来完成的。
2.loan protector project.这个项目因为D&B无法使用而暂停。目前搜集到的list名单共有254个，但是这个list还没有经过mass email来测试。
3.service bureau project.这个项目list的搜集是为了mass mailing做准备的。
4.Chinese Community project.这个项目的list名单前一段时间已经由max打过cold call.
5.mortgage bank list.这是参加第94届MBA会议的人员名单列表。如果要打cold call的话，这个列表还可以考虑。

你做好给出中文,不然我不知道你想写什么.
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Let me introduce all the customer lists in hand (手头).
1.Redaction project.There are 6 states’ recipients lists now,and we have run three times redaction on each state.The cold calls on this project are completed by our America colleague—Bill.
2.Loan protect project.The project was suspended because of the D&B system failure（如果是邓白氏的问题可以这么讲,但如果是被调查公司的问题,最好用D&B failure score）.There are more than 200 customer lists now.But we haven’t tested on the customer list by mass email.
3.Service bureau project.The customer list collection on the project is for (只有人才能做原来那个短语的主语) preparations for mass mailing.
4.Chinese Community project.Max made cold call a few days ago.
5.Mortgage bank project.This is the attendee list for the 93 Annual MBA’s convention.The job was assigned by Michael.You can find the attendee names,companies and contact info.in the list.I think maybe it could be of some help for the cold call.