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中文的意思: 我读了你的招聘广告,我想成为一个演员。
  
  我喜欢唱歌和跳舞,我赢得了一等奖的舞蹈。我喜欢和其他年轻人一样,因为大家一起学唱歌和跳舞,所以它很有趣。我想参加学校的演出。让观众感到表演又幽默,又很好。我喜欢晚上练习舞蹈,周末也是练习舞蹈和唱歌。你们需要的是我! I read your advertisement, I wanted to be an actor. I like singing and dancing, I won the first prize of the dance. I like with other young people, because everyone together learn to sing and dance, so it is very interesting. I want to join the school performance. Let the audience feel performance and humorous, it was very good. I like dancing, weekend evening exercise also practise dancing and singing. Do you need me!
急~改作文
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解题过程:
我喜欢唱歌和跳舞,我赢得了一等奖的舞蹈。我喜欢和其他年轻人一样,因为大家一起学唱歌和跳舞,所以它很有趣。我想参加学校的演出。让观众感到表演又幽默,又很好。我喜欢晚上练习舞蹈,周末也是练习舞蹈和唱歌。你们需要的是我!
I read your advertisement, I wanted to be an actor.
I like singing and dancing, I won the first prize of the dance. I like to work with other young people, because it is very interesting for everyone to learn to sing and dance together. I want to be in the school performance. Let the audience feel humorous and good. I like practising dancing in the evening.On weekends I also practise dancing and singing. Do you need me!
很高兴为你评改作文,如你还有不懂的地方,你可以在添加讨论中继续发言,我会尽快给你回复的。我是太阳雨老师,祝你学习进步,天天快乐。
最终答案:略