i have a small holiday.i thing thia holiday was very relxing

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i have a small holiday.i thing thia holiday was very relxing.first day i went shopping with
my mother.webought some clouthes and gifts.seccond day i with ma mother and my father visited my grandmother .my grangmother looks more and more older,but she is more and more kind too .the other days.i stayed at home .i watched tv and did my homework.this is my holiday 这篇文章有什么错误之处,一一指出,这篇文章的翻译是：我有一个短的假期,我认为这个假期是轻松的,第一天,我和妈妈去购物,我们买了一些衣服和一些礼物,第二天,我和爸爸妈妈去看望玩祖母,我的外祖母看上去越来越老了,但是她也越来越和蔼了,其他天,我呆在家里,看电视和做我的作业,这就是我的假期

如果是一个短的假期第一句用short会更合适（代替small）
第二句应该是i think thisholiday was very relaxing
还有first second前要加the,序数词前要加the,the day后加逗号,而且你second也拼错
还有语序问题seccond day i with ma mother and my father visited my grandmother .应改为The second day,i visited my grandmother with my mother and my father .
没有more older 应该是older and older,还有kind后加逗号
其他可以了
再问： the second day 是第二天的意思吗，
再答：是的

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