帮忙看看这段话Does it bother you that I can't help caring for you?I

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帮忙看看这段话
Does it bother you that I can't help caring for you?
I hope I 'll be able to become your enjoy instesd of your burden.Please tell me your really feeling.I want you to be happy everyday.I'll try my best.
哪里有错误,帮忙修饰得完美一点
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要表达的意思：
我的关心是否成为了你的负担?我希望我能够成为你的享受,而不是负担.告诉我你的真实感受.我希望你能够快乐.我会尽我所能.

诚实的说,你的短文中没有什么语法错误,但是就是不像英语,没有英语的味道.
主要是你太注重修饰太婉转了,没有母语人士说话那么直接,用词没有他们那么生动.要说是文学写法吧,又不够讲究.
我得承认我的功力没那么高,最多也就是能闻出英语的味道,让我写还差了十万八千里.在这里也就只能起个批评者的角色,无法帮上你的忙.十分抱歉.
最后说一下我的看法,这篇文章挺好的,没什么毛病,不用再改了.

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