百度作业网哪位叔叔阿姨帮我改一下英语作文哪里有语法错误,本人初中刚毕业在学高中英语
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哪位叔叔阿姨帮我改一下英语作文哪里有语法错误,本人初中刚毕业在学高中英语
假如你是john,你的笔友李刚口语不好,他来征求你的意见,请你给他写一封回信,词数100左右
Dear Li Gang:
Thank you for your letter .I'm sorry to hear that you have some trouble with your spoken English.You should practice makes perfect.And on the class ,you should speak as more as possible,your teacher and classmates will get over your wrong.When class is over,you should practice more and more,and strengthen your English.and association with your claamates,help each other.and
must have believed your heart.Don't be afraid for wrong ,don't be afraid for ohers laugh at you.As long as your keep ,you must have improve your English speaking.
Best wishes,Yours sincerely,
john
假如你是john,你的笔友李刚口语不好,他来征求你的意见,请你给他写一封回信,词数100左右
Dear Li Gang:
Thank you for your letter .I'm sorry to hear that you have some trouble with your spoken English.You should practice makes perfect.And on the class ,you should speak as more as possible,your teacher and classmates will get over your wrong.When class is over,you should practice more and more,and strengthen your English.and association with your claamates,help each other.and
must have believed your heart.Don't be afraid for wrong ,don't be afraid for ohers laugh at you.As long as your keep ,you must have improve your English speaking.
Best wishes,Yours sincerely,
john
你好,同学,很高兴回答你的问题
正确答案：
Dear Li Gang,（此处用逗号）
Thank you for your letter . I'm sorry to hear that you have some trouble with your spoken English.You should know （变成宾语从句,加一个动词）practice makes perfect. And in class （在课堂上是in class,中间没有冠词）,you should speak as more as possible,your teacher and classmates will get over your mistakes （wrong是形容词,应该用名词）.When class is over,you should practice more and more,and strengthen your English, and associate （应该用动词） with your claamates,help each other. And
you （缺少主语）must have believed yourself （相信自己就可以了）.Don't be afraid of being wrong ( be afraid of doing sth害怕做某事 ） , and don't be afraid of （ be afraid of sb. ) ohers laughing （动名词作宾语补足语） at you. As long as you keep （应该用人称代词作主语,因为keep是动词,前面用人称代词作主语） ,you must improve （去掉have, 因为must have done 是说过去必须做而没做,这是对将来时的预测,用must do） your spoken English(英语口语） .
Best wishes, Yours sincerely,
john
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希望能帮到你,祝更上一层楼O(∩_∩)O
不明白请继续追问,可以详谈嘛(*^__^*)
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正确答案：
Dear Li Gang,（此处用逗号）
Thank you for your letter . I'm sorry to hear that you have some trouble with your spoken English.You should know （变成宾语从句,加一个动词）practice makes perfect. And in class （在课堂上是in class,中间没有冠词）,you should speak as more as possible,your teacher and classmates will get over your mistakes （wrong是形容词,应该用名词）.When class is over,you should practice more and more,and strengthen your English, and associate （应该用动词） with your claamates,help each other. And
you （缺少主语）must have believed yourself （相信自己就可以了）.Don't be afraid of being wrong ( be afraid of doing sth害怕做某事 ） , and don't be afraid of （ be afraid of sb. ) ohers laughing （动名词作宾语补足语） at you. As long as you keep （应该用人称代词作主语,因为keep是动词,前面用人称代词作主语） ,you must improve （去掉have, 因为must have done 是说过去必须做而没做,这是对将来时的预测,用must do） your spoken English(英语口语） .
Best wishes, Yours sincerely,
john
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
希望能帮到你,祝更上一层楼O(∩_∩)O
不明白请继续追问,可以详谈嘛(*^__^*)
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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