百度作业网谁帮我看一下,我儿子写的这篇英语短文,用词合理吗,句子通顺吗?
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谁帮我看一下,我儿子写的这篇英语短文,用词合理吗,句子通顺吗?
Im going to have a busy weekend!on saturday.Im going to the wang tan by bus.Im going to by a new pen.new note book.new math magazine and some story_books.Then Im going to go home and read the new books and doing homework.on sunday,Im going to the supermarket with my dassmate.we"re going aften lunch.then in the eveing.Im going to read the book.and sleep.that will be fun!what about you?what are you going to do on the weekend?
Im going to have a busy weekend!on saturday.Im going to the wang tan by bus.Im going to by a new pen.new note book.new math magazine and some story_books.Then Im going to go home and read the new books and doing homework.on sunday,Im going to the supermarket with my dassmate.we"re going aften lunch.then in the eveing.Im going to read the book.and sleep.that will be fun!what about you?what are you going to do on the weekend?
1.Im应为I'am,它是I和am的缩写
2.Im going to by a new pen中的by应为buy,buy意为“买”
3.new note book.new math magazine 应为a new note book.a new math magazine .不定冠词a不可省
4.and read the new books 应去掉and,当出现多个并列词组时,前几个之间用逗号连接,最后两个之间要用and
5.we"re going aften lunch应为we're going to there aften lunch.go后面的宾语不可省,否则句子不完整
6.and sleep最好改为then sleep.因为and表示并列,而then是“然后”,有一个先后关系,逻辑上也的确是先看书然后睡觉,而不是“看书并且睡觉”
7.on the weekend?应为On weekends,意为“在周末”
2.Im going to by a new pen中的by应为buy,buy意为“买”
3.new note book.new math magazine 应为a new note book.a new math magazine .不定冠词a不可省
4.and read the new books 应去掉and,当出现多个并列词组时,前几个之间用逗号连接,最后两个之间要用and
5.we"re going aften lunch应为we're going to there aften lunch.go后面的宾语不可省,否则句子不完整
6.and sleep最好改为then sleep.因为and表示并列,而then是“然后”,有一个先后关系,逻辑上也的确是先看书然后睡觉,而不是“看书并且睡觉”
7.on the weekend?应为On weekends,意为“在周末”