三一伦敦英语口语考试的文章..帮忙修改一下

老师,您好 我将参加三以英语伦敦口语考试。我报的是6级,中级的,这里有一篇我要参加考试的文章,麻烦帮我修改一下,谢谢!
我的话题是关于beijing的.6级需要6个讨论点,争取多帮我加点从句。我列了一个提纲 1.Beijing enviroment 北京的环境 2.Travel to Beijing 到北京旅游 3.Beijing people 北京人 4.the weather in beijing 北京的天气 5.beijing food 北京的食品 6.beijing culture 北京的文化 下面是正文: I was born in Beijing. Beijing is the capital of the China. The enviroment is nice . Now ,the air pollution is less and less although there is a lot of cars. There are more and more trees. The city is more and more beautiful. Travel to Beijing is a good idea. Beijing has a lot of the sights（名胜古迹大概是这么写吧）.They have long history. Foe exmaple: BeiHai Park, Palace Museum, The Great Wall and so on.I like to visit them very much. The people in Beijing are very friendly, warth and ture. If you have any problems, they will hepl you by anyway if they know. The weather in beijing is good. In spring, it's warm. It's comfortable. In summer, it's always sunny .and sometimes willrain. In fall, it's cool. I like fall best. I love the color of the fall—gold. Everthing is gold, very beautiful ! In winter, it's cold, it's will snow. People can play snowman. The food in beijing are delicious. There are lots of special foods.like Peking duck, wan dou huang , lv da gun...There're very very tasty. I love it! Beijing is a modern and old city. There are lots of the sights,but also lots of big modern buildings. Beijing also has some tradion. it's have mang festival. Different festival has different tradition. When spring festival coming, we can play fireworks. It's interesting. And we should eat Jiaozi in the night of the spring festival. I like eat Jiaozi. Beijingis a beautiful, modern but also old city. I love Beijing !

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I was born in Beijing. Beijing is the capital of the China. The enviroment is nice . Now ,the air pollution is less and less although there is(are) a lot of cars. There are more and more trees. The city is more and more beautiful.
Travel (Travelling)to Beijing is a good idea. Beijing has a lot of the sights（places of interest）.They have (a) long history. Foe (for) exmaple: BeiHai Park, Palace Museum, The Great Wall and so on.I like to visit them very much.
The people in Beijing are very friendly, warth and ture (warm-hearted and honest). If you have any problems, they will hepl (help) you by anyway (in any way )if they know.
The weather in beijing is good. In spring, it's warm. It's comfortable. In summer, it's always sunny .and sometimes (it) willrain. In (the) fall, it's cool. I like (the) fall best. I love the color of the fall—gold. Everthing is gold, very beautiful ! In winter, it's cold, it's (it) will snow. People can play snowman.
The food in beijing are (is) delicious. There are lots of special foods.like Peking duck, wan dou huang , lv da gun...There're (They’re) very very tasty. I love it (them)!
Beijing is a modern and old city. There are lots of the sights,but also lots of (with both historical places of interest and) big modern buildings. Beijing also has some tradion. it's have mang festival(traditional festivals). Different festivals have different tradition (stories). When the spring festival coming (comes), we can play fireworks. It's interesting. And we should eat Jiaozi in (on) the night of the spring festival. I like eating Jiaozi.
Beijingis a beautiful, modern but also old city. I love Beijing !
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