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Success is not because of luck ,but hard work
When you succeed,others will say congratulations to you.They often say that you are in luck and the God bless you.Then I want to tell you that the success is not because of luck,but hard work.Then I will give you an example to explain why I say.
The company hire two news employees.One is graduated from a famous university,and the other one is graduated from a normal university.When he who came from the normal university came to the company to work at the first time,many people said he was in luck.But he just laugh it off.
Later,in an internal selection of competent competition,he was final,and the one who was graduated from a famous university was final too.And he made the final victory.In the promotion of the reception,a lot of people said that his luck was very good,because of that his leader was the judge.
But,I want to say that his success is not by luck,but by hard work.In fact,no one knows that how much effort he made,how many nights he was without sleep and how much date he analysed.
As the saying goes,the opportunity is often to those who are prepared,and the good luck often likes to the hard-working people.The hard working can get more knowledge,so when the opportunity comes,you can catch it and make success.
要求，语言优美，用词连贯
Success is not because of luck ,but hard work
When you succeed,others will say congratulations to you.They often say that you are in luck and the God bless you.Then I want to tell you that the success is not because of luck,but hard work.Then I will give you an example to explain why I say.
The company hire two news employees.One is graduated from a famous university,and the other one is graduated from a normal university.When he who came from the normal university came to the company to work at the first time,many people said he was in luck.But he just laugh it off.
Later,in an internal selection of competent competition,he was final,and the one who was graduated from a famous university was final too.And he made the final victory.In the promotion of the reception,a lot of people said that his luck was very good,because of that his leader was the judge.
But,I want to say that his success is not by luck,but by hard work.In fact,no one knows that how much effort he made,how many nights he was without sleep and how much date he analysed.
As the saying goes,the opportunity is often to those who are prepared,and the good luck often likes to the hard-working people.The hard working can get more knowledge,so when the opportunity comes,you can catch it and make success.
要求，语言优美，用词连贯
Success is not because of luck ,but hard working.
When you succeed,others will congratulate to you.They always think that you are in luck and the God bless you.Then I want to tell you that the success is not because of luck,but hard work.Here is an example to show you the details.
There are two new employees in a company.One graduated from a famous university,and the other one was from a normal university.Many people said the latter was in luck.But he just laugh it off.
He made the final victory in an internal selection of competent competition.On the podium ,a lot of people said that he was really very lucky,as his leader was the judge.
Who knows that how much effort he made,how many time he worked for and how much data he analysed?
It is said that the opportunity is often to those who are prepared,and the good luck often likes to the hard-working people.The hard working can get more knowledge,so when the opportunity comes,you can catch it and make success.
稍微改了下,最重要是不重复,不啰嗦,能一句话解决的,坚决不用两句.
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再答： 。。。。好吧，那我帮不了你了。。系统跟人没法儿比~
When you succeed,others will congratulate to you.They always think that you are in luck and the God bless you.Then I want to tell you that the success is not because of luck,but hard work.Here is an example to show you the details.
There are two new employees in a company.One graduated from a famous university,and the other one was from a normal university.Many people said the latter was in luck.But he just laugh it off.
He made the final victory in an internal selection of competent competition.On the podium ,a lot of people said that he was really very lucky,as his leader was the judge.
Who knows that how much effort he made,how many time he worked for and how much data he analysed?
It is said that the opportunity is often to those who are prepared,and the good luck often likes to the hard-working people.The hard working can get more knowledge,so when the opportunity comes,you can catch it and make success.
稍微改了下,最重要是不重复,不啰嗦,能一句话解决的,坚决不用两句.
再问： 哥们，其实，我是想在批改网上提交作文，我刚写的那篇，76.5！你的才74....http://分割xiezuo.kekenet. 分割com/#。要是你能过90，我追加50分
再答： 。。。。好吧，那我帮不了你了。。系统跟人没法儿比~