百度作业网Not a gold mine （中译英）大家帮我看看哪里改写错了.
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Not a gold mine （中译英）大家帮我看看哪里改写错了.
Saturday November.13th 2010 Sunny 19-22 degree Celsius
Not a gold mine
The dream of finding missing treasures nearly came true recently.A new machine called revealer has been invented.It was used to detect gold which was buried underground.This machine was used in a cave by the sea shore where pirates used to store gold.The pirates used to bury gold in that cave but they failed to take it away.A searching party armed by these new machines entered in this cave and they hoped to find out the buried gold.When the leader examined the soil nearly the cave entrance the machine showed there was gold underground.The team members were so excited that they dug a hole two feet deep and only found a worthless coin at last.But the members continued to search everywhere in cave once.There was noting to be found but an empty metal trunk.Even so,many people still trusted that revealer would detect some valuable things soon.
Saturday November.13th 2010 Sunny 19-22 degree Celsius
Not a gold mine
The dream of finding missing treasures nearly came true recently.A new machine called revealer has been invented.It was used to detect gold which was buried underground.This machine was used in a cave by the sea shore where pirates used to store gold.The pirates used to bury gold in that cave but they failed to take it away.A searching party armed by these new machines entered in this cave and they hoped to find out the buried gold.When the leader examined the soil nearly the cave entrance the machine showed there was gold underground.The team members were so excited that they dug a hole two feet deep and only found a worthless coin at last.But the members continued to search everywhere in cave once.There was noting to be found but an empty metal trunk.Even so,many people still trusted that revealer would detect some valuable things soon.
The dream of finding missing treasures nearly came true recently.A new machine called revealer has been invented.It was used to detect gold which was buried underground.This machine was used in a cave NEAR THE sea shore where pirates used to store gold.The pirates used to bury gold in that cave but they failed to take it away.A searching party armed WITH these new machines entered this cave and they hoped to find out the buried gold.When the leader examined the soil near the cave entrance the machine showed there was gold underground.The team members were so excited that they dug a hole two feet deep and only found a worthless coin.But the members continued to search everywhere in cave.There was nothing to be found but an empty metal trunk.Even so,many people still trusted that THE revealer would detect some valuable things soon
只有几个地方,我觉得读的有点不顺,其它地方都很好
只有几个地方,我觉得读的有点不顺,其它地方都很好
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