百度作业网请大神帮忙看下有没有语法错误
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请大神帮忙看下有没有语法错误
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a senior student which comes from Peking University.I am writing to you to find a child that I can give him some help.
In the first place,I want to assistanta child who comes from a disadvantaged family.What’s more,he must be loves to learn.In order to help him to growth healthily.I will give him 1000 yuan every term.In summer holiday,I can teach him English and Math.
Thank you very much for your patience and kindness in reading this letter.I would highly appreciate it if you could help me to find a candidate.I am looking forward to your earlyreplay.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
In order to help him to growth healthily
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a senior student which comes from Peking University.I am writing to you to find a child that I can give him some help.
In the first place,I want to assistanta child who comes from a disadvantaged family.What’s more,he must be loves to learn.In order to help him to growth healthily.I will give him 1000 yuan every term.In summer holiday,I can teach him English and Math.
Thank you very much for your patience and kindness in reading this letter.I would highly appreciate it if you could help me to find a candidate.I am looking forward to your earlyreplay.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
In order to help him to growth healthily
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a senior student 【that】 comes from Peking University.I am writing to you to find a child【to whom】 I can give 【him删除】 some help.
In the first place,I want to 【assist】t a child who comes from 【a less fortunate】 family.What’s more,he must 【 love】 to learn.In order to help him to 【grow】 healthily.I will give him 1000 yuan every term.In summer holiday,I can teach him English and Math.
Thank you very much for your patience and kindness in reading this letter.I would highly appreciate it if you could help me to find a candidate.I am looking forward to your early replay.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
再问： 谢谢！但是这句话 In order to help him to grow healthily 打到word里面有绿色的下划线，说是由语法错误，为什么啊？是对的吗？
再答： 是对的，没问题。
I am a senior student 【that】 comes from Peking University.I am writing to you to find a child【to whom】 I can give 【him删除】 some help.
In the first place,I want to 【assist】t a child who comes from 【a less fortunate】 family.What’s more,he must 【 love】 to learn.In order to help him to 【grow】 healthily.I will give him 1000 yuan every term.In summer holiday,I can teach him English and Math.
Thank you very much for your patience and kindness in reading this letter.I would highly appreciate it if you could help me to find a candidate.I am looking forward to your early replay.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
再问： 谢谢！但是这句话 In order to help him to grow healthily 打到word里面有绿色的下划线，说是由语法错误，为什么啊？是对的吗？
再答： 是对的，没问题。