百度作业网这篇英语作文有没有什么问题?
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这篇英语作文有没有什么问题?
My Canadian Friend
25 years ago,I went to Nevada with my canadian friend and his fathers,mothers and wives.He has 72 fathers.91 mothers and 19999 wives.All canadian women like him because he has 199 trillion dollars.He is a handsome black person.He likes eating that he eats 999 pigs,1999 sheep,99999 tigers and 199999 elephants.He is fat that obama built a city called "San Fatass" on his body.Last year,one doctor said he had cancer.Before he died,he said he wanted to donate all his organs.Today,he has died for a long time,his organs are in a small village.The villagers there says that though their new houses are smelly,but they never want to fuck the government.Obviously,they don't know their new "houses" is from a fat ass.
第四排 elephants 后面加个 everyday
倒数第三排 says 的 s 去掉
My Canadian Friend
25 years ago,I went to Nevada with my canadian friend and his fathers,mothers and wives.He has 72 fathers.91 mothers and 19999 wives.All canadian women like him because he has 199 trillion dollars.He is a handsome black person.He likes eating that he eats 999 pigs,1999 sheep,99999 tigers and 199999 elephants.He is fat that obama built a city called "San Fatass" on his body.Last year,one doctor said he had cancer.Before he died,he said he wanted to donate all his organs.Today,he has died for a long time,his organs are in a small village.The villagers there says that though their new houses are smelly,but they never want to fuck the government.Obviously,they don't know their new "houses" is from a fat ass.
第四排 elephants 后面加个 everyday
倒数第三排 says 的 s 去掉
正文第六行：把has died 改为has been dead
第七行也有问题：应该把but去掉
第七行也有问题：应该把but去掉