Good afternoon ladies and gentlemen,

Good afternoon ladies and gentlemen,
First of all ,I would like to extent a warm welcome to all of you joining us here today for the competition.And my title is I LOOK FORWARD TO LIBERTY.
I don’t know if you have read a book which named I DON’T FORGIVE,This book told about the education of China.It’s said :China not only has the machine building industry but also has the professionals industry.When you camo in,you are a human,but when you go out ,you become a robot.And these robots must also become the pillars of China.Many people dislike the saying,yet,you have to admit it’s true.Nowadays,university is a merchant who just sell stuffs.It doesn’t need dream.We ought to stop it.
Nowadays,China still follow the traditional,this looks OK ,but as time goes by.People gradually realized ,children in western countries learned much more quickly than students in China.
Some people find out it’s because we are unconstrained .What’s your personal definition of liberty?Maybe someone says,it means do anything you wanna do.However,in my opinion,it points our mind,maybe,thinking.
The education of China system continues to emphasize rote learning at the expense of innovation and creative thinking.This obstinate adherence to an outdated ways not the only gaping intellectual flaw it’s about the future.We cannot let the school become a place where is killing humans’ dream .we believe that our mind will be free,and I sincerely hope so.Liberty,that’s what I look forward to.

教育/科学 >外语学习 >英语翻译Good afternoon,ladies and gentlemen,
First of all ,I would like to extent a warm welcome to all of you for joining in the competition.And my title is I LOOK FORWARD TO LIBERTY.
I don’t know if you have read a book named I DON’T FORGIVE,This book told about the education of China.It’s said :China not only has the machine building industry but also has the professionals industry.When you come in,you are a human,but when you go out ,you become a robot.And these robots must also become the pillars of China.Many people dislike the saying,yet,you have to admit it’s true.Nowadays,university is a merchant who just sell stuffs.It doesn’t need dream.We ought to stop it.
Nowadays,China still follow the traditional,this looks OK ,but as time goes by.People have gradually realized ,children in western countries learned much more quickly than students in China.
Some people find out it’s because we are unconstrained .What’s your personal definition of liberty?Maybe someone says,it means do anything you wanna do.However,in my opinion,it points our mind,maybe,thinking.
The education of China system continues to emphasize rote learning at the expense of innovation and creative thinking.This obstinate adherence to an outdated ways not the only gaping intellectual flaw it’s about the future.We cannot let the school become a place to kill humans’ dream .we believe that our mind will be free,and I sincerely hope so.Liberty,that’s what I look forward to.
再问： 没有什么严重的语病么。。。我的老师说几乎没有一个对的句子。。。