英语翻译帮忙看看这几句翻译的对不对,不对的话麻烦帮忙改正,原句1.姚明是一名无私善良的篮球运动员,以巨人而著称,他效力于

英语翻译
帮忙看看这几句翻译的对不对,不对的话麻烦帮忙改正,
原句
1.姚明是一名无私善良的篮球运动员,以巨人而著称,他效力于NBA休斯顿火箭队.
2.小沈阳由于在春晚精彩的表演立刻在全国成为了热门人物.
3.由于他一直是以传统的方式成长的,所以自私和冷酷不是他的本质.
4.毫无疑问他无愧于“一代杰出的音乐家”这一称号.
5.一度我以为他要拒绝,但最后他却同意了.
6.以前他在一支业余球队打球,后来他决心成为职业球员.
7.他理应受到处罚因为他对长者不礼貌.
8.这条马路是以一位英雄的名字而命名的,他为中国人民的解放事业献出了生命.
9.报纸上的这篇文章引起了他的注意,如果有必要的话我们可以更改旅行日期.
10.上周我们开的会议获得了成功.
翻译：
1.Yao Ming is a selfless and kind basketball player,is known as a giant,he played for NBA Houston Rockets.
2.Xiao Shenyang instants became a hit person because of his wonderful perform in the spring evening.
3.Because of he brought up in a tradition way all the time,selfish and callous is not in his nature.
4.There's no doubt that he deserves the title “outstanding musicians of his generation.”
5.At once point I thought he would refused but he agree at last.
6.In the past he played for an amateur team ,afterwards he decided became a professional player.
7.He deserves to be punished,because he be rude to old people.
8.This road is named after a hero,who gives his life for the liberate enterprise.
9.The article which in the newspaper draw his attention to,if necessary we can change our travel date.
10.It was a success for our to the meeting in the last week.

1.Yao Ming,known as a giant,is a selfless and kind basketball player ,who played for NBA Houston Rockets.
2.Xiao Shenyang instantly became a hit person because of his wonderful perform in the spring evening.
3.Because he was brought up in a tradition way all the time,selfishness and callousness is not in his nature.
4.There's no doubt that he deserves the title “one of the outstanding musicians of his generation.”
5.At one time,I thought he would refused but at last,he agreed .
6.He used to play for an amateur team; afterwards he decided to become a professional player.
7.He deserves to be punished,because he is rude to old people.
8.This road is named after a hero,who sacrificed his life to the liberate enterprise.
9.The article in the newspaper drew his attention ;if necessary,we can change our travel date.(说实话,这句话本身有问题,前后根本好像没有关系)
10.The meeting we had last week was a success.