百度作业网帮我看下这句英文句子有没有语法之类的错误?
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帮我看下这句英文句子有没有语法之类的错误?
In addition, compared to the only 0.3 points of gap between the rock music group and the no music group, the 1.5 points of distance from the soft music group to the no music group was quite large.
In addition, compared to the only 0.3 points of gap between the rock music group and the no music group, the 1.5 points of distance from the soft music group to the no music group was quite large.
差距用 gap 可以,distance 就不大恰当了.
句子略为重组一下,读起来能够更简洁清楚一些：
In addition, relative to a gap of only 0.3 points between the "rock music" group and the "no music" group, the 1.5 between "soft music" and "no music" was quite large.
再问： 其实，我主要觉得前后有两个between,就不知道怎么样用其它词来代替
再答： 事实上两个指数确实得靠 between 来捆绑，没必要在这上面刻意回避的；有了前半句作为依托，后半句反倒不必再加上 the 和 group 了 - 那部分才是我觉得比较累赘的，如此改写自己读一下就可以感觉到不这么拗口啦。
句子略为重组一下,读起来能够更简洁清楚一些：
In addition, relative to a gap of only 0.3 points between the "rock music" group and the "no music" group, the 1.5 between "soft music" and "no music" was quite large.
再问： 其实，我主要觉得前后有两个between,就不知道怎么样用其它词来代替
再答： 事实上两个指数确实得靠 between 来捆绑，没必要在这上面刻意回避的；有了前半句作为依托，后半句反倒不必再加上 the 和 group 了 - 那部分才是我觉得比较累赘的，如此改写自己读一下就可以感觉到不这么拗口啦。