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帮我修改一下这篇英文推荐信
I am very pleased to recommend Miss xx,an excellent graduate from xx Institute of Technology,to the master program of Economics at your university.Such an outstanding person as her in terms of character and abilities is indeed worthy of this opportunity to develop her potential and contribute to your school.I am sure that she will be a promising student who will greatly benefit from the future study at your esteemed university.
During my many years as a Professor I have come into contact with countless students.While some students stand out in the time that I teach them,only few make a lasting impression.Being one of my most gifted students,x is someone who has made such as impression.In spite of the fact that it has been only four years since I have had her as student,her delightful personality and ability of organization and leadership gave me deep impression.x showed her quick ability of acceptance new knowledge.In class,she was always the most active one who often discussed with other students about academic issues in order to make progress for each other.Besides,thanks to her earnest and strict attitude to study,x was always top10 in class.In addition,she demonstrated her strong organizational skill in various campus activities.For example,she organized students to visit Ministry of Foreign Affairs,and due to her excellent performance,Miss x was highly praised by the teachers as well as students.
x is really an extraordinary student with great intelligence and strong ability of organization.I believe that she will be as much of an asset to your university with her rich and colorful professional experience.I dearly hope that you will consider her application favorable.In case you need any future information about her,please feel free to contact me.
这算是个大体模板吧,其中加入一些具体的东西
1.每年获得奖学金2.在学校举行的虚拟炒股比赛中获三等奖3.之前一直在学生会工作,组织能力强,深受同学和老师喜爱4.热爱运动,排球打得好
希望英语高手将这些和上面那个模板有机融合起来,看起来自然顺畅
当然语言看起来要像一个教授说的,最佳还会追加100分
I am very pleased to recommend Miss xx,an excellent graduate from xx Institute of Technology,to the master program of Economics at your university.Such an outstanding person as her in terms of character and abilities is indeed worthy of this opportunity to develop her potential and contribute to your school.I am sure that she will be a promising student who will greatly benefit from the future study at your esteemed university.
During my many years as a Professor I have come into contact with countless students.While some students stand out in the time that I teach them,only few make a lasting impression.Being one of my most gifted students,x is someone who has made such as impression.In spite of the fact that it has been only four years since I have had her as student,her delightful personality and ability of organization and leadership gave me deep impression.x showed her quick ability of acceptance new knowledge.In class,she was always the most active one who often discussed with other students about academic issues in order to make progress for each other.Besides,thanks to her earnest and strict attitude to study,x was always top10 in class.In addition,she demonstrated her strong organizational skill in various campus activities.For example,she organized students to visit Ministry of Foreign Affairs,and due to her excellent performance,Miss x was highly praised by the teachers as well as students.
x is really an extraordinary student with great intelligence and strong ability of organization.I believe that she will be as much of an asset to your university with her rich and colorful professional experience.I dearly hope that you will consider her application favorable.In case you need any future information about her,please feel free to contact me.
这算是个大体模板吧,其中加入一些具体的东西
1.每年获得奖学金2.在学校举行的虚拟炒股比赛中获三等奖3.之前一直在学生会工作,组织能力强,深受同学和老师喜爱4.热爱运动,排球打得好
希望英语高手将这些和上面那个模板有机融合起来,看起来自然顺畅
当然语言看起来要像一个教授说的,最佳还会追加100分
I am very pleased to recommend Miss xx, an excellent graduate from xx Institute of Technology, to the master program of Economics at your university. Such an outstanding person as her in terms of character and abilities is indeed worthy of this opportunity to develop her potential and contribute to your school. I am sure that she will be a promising student who will greatly benefit from the future study at your esteemed university.
During my many years as a Professor I have come into contact with countless students. While some students stand out in the time that I teach them, only few make a lasting impression. Being one of my most gifted students, x is someone who has made such as impression. In spite of the fact that it has been only four years since I have had her as student, her delightful personality and ability of organization and leadership gave me deep impression. x showed her quick ability of accepting (acceptance改为accepting) new knowledge. In class, she was always the most active one who often discussed with other students about academic issues in order to make progress for each other.Besides, thanks to her earnest and strict attitude to study, x was always top10 in class and (won the scholarship every year本句是按你的要求插进去的). In addition, she demonstrated her strong organizational skill in various campus activities. For example, she organized students to visit Ministry of Foreign Affairs.(She won the third prize in the Virtual Stocking Contest held by the school 本句是按你的要求插进去的) Due to her excellent performance, Miss x was highly praised by the teachers as well as students.
x is really an extraordinary student with great intelligence and strong ability of organization. (She worked at Student Union for years and was deeply loved by the teachers and the students.本句是按你的要求插进去的)
Meanwhile,Miss X is in good health.She loves sports, playing volleyball very well.
For the reasons mentioned above,I dearly hope that you will consider her application favorable. In case you need any future information about her, please feel free to contact me.
修改并整理后的全文如下：
I am very pleased to recommend Miss xx, an excellent graduate from xx Institute of Technology, to the master program of Economics at your university. Such an outstanding person as her in terms of character and abilities is indeed worthy of this opportunity to develop her potential and contribute to your school. I am sure that she will be a promising student who will greatly benefit from the future study at your esteemed university.
During my many years as a Professor I have come into contact with countless students. While some students stand out in the time that I teach them, only few make a lasting impression. Being one of my most gifted students, x is someone who has made such as impression. In spite of the fact that it has been only four years since I have had her as student, her delightful personality and ability of organization and leadership gave me deep impression. x showed her quick ability of accepting new knowledge. In class, she was always the most active one who often discussed with other students about academic issues in order to make progress for each other.Besides, thanks to her earnest and strict attitude to study, x was always top10 in class and won the scholarship every year. In addition, she demonstrated her strong organizational skill in various campus activities. For example, she organized students to visit Ministry of Foreign Affairs.She won the third prize in the Virtual Stocking Contest held by the school.Due to her excellent performance, Miss X was highly praised by the teachers as well as students.
X is really an extraordinary student with great intelligence and strong ability of organization. She worked at Student Union for years and was deeply loved by the teachers and the students.
Meanwhile,Miss X is in good health.She loves sports, playing volleyball very well.
For the reasons mentioned above,I dearly hope that you will consider her application favorable. In case you need any future information about her, please feel free to contact me.
During my many years as a Professor I have come into contact with countless students. While some students stand out in the time that I teach them, only few make a lasting impression. Being one of my most gifted students, x is someone who has made such as impression. In spite of the fact that it has been only four years since I have had her as student, her delightful personality and ability of organization and leadership gave me deep impression. x showed her quick ability of accepting (acceptance改为accepting) new knowledge. In class, she was always the most active one who often discussed with other students about academic issues in order to make progress for each other.Besides, thanks to her earnest and strict attitude to study, x was always top10 in class and (won the scholarship every year本句是按你的要求插进去的). In addition, she demonstrated her strong organizational skill in various campus activities. For example, she organized students to visit Ministry of Foreign Affairs.(She won the third prize in the Virtual Stocking Contest held by the school 本句是按你的要求插进去的) Due to her excellent performance, Miss x was highly praised by the teachers as well as students.
x is really an extraordinary student with great intelligence and strong ability of organization. (She worked at Student Union for years and was deeply loved by the teachers and the students.本句是按你的要求插进去的)
Meanwhile,Miss X is in good health.She loves sports, playing volleyball very well.
For the reasons mentioned above,I dearly hope that you will consider her application favorable. In case you need any future information about her, please feel free to contact me.
修改并整理后的全文如下：
I am very pleased to recommend Miss xx, an excellent graduate from xx Institute of Technology, to the master program of Economics at your university. Such an outstanding person as her in terms of character and abilities is indeed worthy of this opportunity to develop her potential and contribute to your school. I am sure that she will be a promising student who will greatly benefit from the future study at your esteemed university.
During my many years as a Professor I have come into contact with countless students. While some students stand out in the time that I teach them, only few make a lasting impression. Being one of my most gifted students, x is someone who has made such as impression. In spite of the fact that it has been only four years since I have had her as student, her delightful personality and ability of organization and leadership gave me deep impression. x showed her quick ability of accepting new knowledge. In class, she was always the most active one who often discussed with other students about academic issues in order to make progress for each other.Besides, thanks to her earnest and strict attitude to study, x was always top10 in class and won the scholarship every year. In addition, she demonstrated her strong organizational skill in various campus activities. For example, she organized students to visit Ministry of Foreign Affairs.She won the third prize in the Virtual Stocking Contest held by the school.Due to her excellent performance, Miss X was highly praised by the teachers as well as students.
X is really an extraordinary student with great intelligence and strong ability of organization. She worked at Student Union for years and was deeply loved by the teachers and the students.
Meanwhile,Miss X is in good health.She loves sports, playing volleyball very well.
For the reasons mentioned above,I dearly hope that you will consider her application favorable. In case you need any future information about her, please feel free to contact me.