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一篇英语作文改错Dear student,Our classmate Feng Xiaoming has studied

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一篇英语作文改错
Dear student,
Our classmate Feng Xiaoming has studied in our class since last year.he studied hard and got good marks.But his family is poor and his father has been ill for many years.But they don't have enough money to see a doctor.We heard of that Feng
Xiaoming would drop out of school .And it is important for him to get an education.So we should try our best to do something to help him,just like raising money for him.We believe if we work together,we can make a better future.
Thank for your help.
Carl
一篇英语作文改错Dear student,Our classmate Feng Xiaoming has studied
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Dear students,
Our classmate Feng Xiaoming has beening studying in our class since last year.He has studied hard and got good marks.But his family is poor and his father has been ill for many years.But they don't have enough money to see a doctor.We heard that Feng
Xiaoming would drop out.And it is important for him to get education.So we should try our best to do something to help him,like raising some money for him.We believe if we work together,we can make him a better future.
Thanks for your help.
Carl