英语翻译Summer I went to Shandong,I was in July 1st.That is my h

英语翻译
Summer I went to Shandong,I was in July 1st.That is my hometown,my parents are going to see Grandpa and grandma.We ride in a car,get there.Where we live,Grandpa's home,it is very comfortable.I also visited Qingdao,where I took a lot of photos.During the holiday I most often do is take pictures,where the scenery is very beautiful.I am back in July 8th.I had a wonderful summer vacation.
【PS：我写的~我怕语句不通顺,特地找人翻译~亲语句不通顺的地方告诉我怎么改~】

Summer I went to Shandong,I was in July 1st.That is my hometown,my parents are going to see Grandpa and grandma.We ride in a car,get there.Where we live,Grandpa's home,it is very comfortable.I also visited Qingdao,where I took a lot of photos.During the holiday I most often do is take pictures,where the scenery is very beautiful.I am back in July 8th.I had a wonderful summer vacation.
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When on summer holiday,I went to my homtown,shandong on 1st July.we went there by car to see grandparents with my parents.it made us so comfortable.在暑假的7月1号我和父母去了我的老家山东探望爷爷奶奶,这一行使我们感到很舒适
And then,I visited qingdao and took a lot of photos.The scenery is very beautiful,so what I do mostly in this holiday was taking pictures.然后,我们又去了青岛,因为景色很美,所以大部分时间我都是在拍照.
At last,we came back on 8th July,it was an exciting wonderful summer vacation.最后,我们在7月8号回家了,这真是一个兴奋而又棒极了的假期啊!
希望对你有用.你自己也要试着去写,理顺了语句.慢慢来.老是依靠网络也不是一件好事.至少是对你的学习
再问： 老大，不是我说唉~我才刚刚接触英语作文唉~我学过的也很少唉~我要是交了你那种的作文，老师绝对会抽我的！而且老师要求是至少十句话！也就是十个内容！不是我依靠网络唉~我怕语句不通顺被老师罚！不过，你这么热心，我还是给你满意好了！（PS：满意追分？）
再答： 哈哈哈，没事啊，我可以帮你改一下你写的哈。看到你那么上进。好好学习 Summer I went to Shandong in 1st July . That is my hometown, my parents went to see Grandpa and grandma. We rode in a car to get there. Where we live, Grandpa's home, it is very comfortable. I also visited Qingdao, where I took a lot of photos. During the holiday I mostly to do was taking pictures, because the scenery is very beautiful. I was back in July 8th. I had a wonderful summer vacation. 这样应该好点，注意一下时态