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请帮我改下作文的错误谢谢
environmental是个形容词.
problem不会变的more dangerous.
produced前面加being.
On on hand,
第二段开头应该有一个连接上下文的句子,否则都不知道你说的是汽车.
cars are convenient when we want to travel around.
pollution不可数,用much,或者说 many types of pollution
直接说：harm us,或者删掉.
take measures 用的不错!一个是measures前面还可以加形容词,rapid,extreme等,另一个measures后面一般都跟着to do something.
一般都说numbers of cars,amount是跟着不可数名次的,比如 amount of money
All of the measures mentioned above
will be greatly improved.
problem不会变的more dangerous.
produced前面加being.
On on hand,
第二段开头应该有一个连接上下文的句子,否则都不知道你说的是汽车.
cars are convenient when we want to travel around.
pollution不可数,用much,或者说 many types of pollution
直接说：harm us,或者删掉.
take measures 用的不错!一个是measures前面还可以加形容词,rapid,extreme等,另一个measures后面一般都跟着to do something.
一般都说numbers of cars,amount是跟着不可数名次的,比如 amount of money
All of the measures mentioned above
will be greatly improved.