作文修改!帮忙看下以下作文,或有语法错误或用词不当,或是你有更好,更有水平的句子来替代某一句,都来帮忙下,About m
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作文修改!
帮忙看下以下作文,或有语法错误或用词不当,或是你有更好,更有水平的句子来替代某一句,都来帮忙下,
About me
I study in a junior middle school.I am 16 years old this year.The height of mine is about 166 cm.And my english name is jude.
I like reading books most,especially these on history.But I am not hard for studying.My favourite sports activities is playing badminton before.But now,I like playing table tennis best.
I am not confident.But I think that I am very friendly to every one.I like making friends with a variety of people.I love my family and my country.My best wish is:let the world full of love!
帮忙看下以下作文,或有语法错误或用词不当,或是你有更好,更有水平的句子来替代某一句,都来帮忙下,
About me
I study in a junior middle school.I am 16 years old this year.The height of mine is about 166 cm.And my english name is jude.
I like reading books most,especially these on history.But I am not hard for studying.My favourite sports activities is playing badminton before.But now,I like playing table tennis best.
I am not confident.But I think that I am very friendly to every one.I like making friends with a variety of people.I love my family and my country.My best wish is:let the world full of love!
a junior middle school 去middle 因为junior school可以完整的表达初中的意思.
The height of mine 改 mine 为 me
My favourite sports activities is playing badminton before.语法错误,既然是以前就该用was 而且 把sports 改为 sport ,因为作形容词用
every one去掉空格 everyone
The height of mine 改 mine 为 me
My favourite sports activities is playing badminton before.语法错误,既然是以前就该用was 而且 把sports 改为 sport ,因为作形容词用
every one去掉空格 everyone
作文修改!帮忙看下以下作文,或有语法错误或用词不当,或是你有更好,更有水平的句子来替代某一句,都来帮忙下,About m
作文修改!帮忙看下以下作文,或有语法错误或用词不当,或是你有更好,更有水平的句子来替代某一句,都来帮忙下,My favo
帮忙看一下这句话有没语法错误或是用词不当
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