跪求专四级以上选手改作业:MORE PRESSURE FROM aCADEMIC STUDIES DOES GOOD T

跪求专四级以上选手改作业:MORE PRESSURE FROM aCADEMIC STUDIES DOES GOOD TO US
There are too many temptation in our society nowadyas why I believe that more pressure from academic studies does good to us.
For instance,as a college student who living in campus.What do you do in your spare time?A lot of college student thought that college life just like a big camp.They are only looking for the association activities.Such as climbing,Taekwondo,cycling etc.But in order to learn your major well,you need to pay much more time to overview what you have leant and what you have understood.If you forget this principle,you are just waisting your time during your college life.
Well,more pressure from academic studies,at least may made you to pay more attention on your major and learn more durng your college life.
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Dear Victoria,Oct 14th,2010
I'm writting this letter to apologize that I have not invited you to take part in the party I hold in my house last week,It is do because I was too busy recent days.And I will hold another another small party for you in next Tuesday to celebrate for your new job.
Sincerely Yours,
Aileen
以上是97年的专四作文考题，第一篇好像短了点。

More pressure from academic studies does good to us
currently,with the rapid development of our society whereas also exist too many temptation.it will threaten to our study and play a harmful influence to us.as a college student,it is my aspiration that more pressure from academic studies will benefit us ,here are my following reasons:
firstly,most of the college students are living in campus,numbers of college students thought that college life resembles a big camp,they are only looking for the recreation activities.such as:they spent too much time on playing pc games or excessively doing love affairs,although it is known that college is sometimes called "ivory tower",study is our major task,we should not wasting too much time on those unnecessary activities.
secondly,more pressure can inspire ourselves to understand the importance of study.for instance,in your spare time,you should pay much more time to overview what you have learnt and what is the weakness of yourself.moreover,you can learn the skills of making a periodic conclusion of your personal study.
to sum up,appropriate out-class activities are necessary,in my opinion,more pressure from academic studies can enhance the awareness of our study and a cornerstone to be a valuable person in the future.
好久不写作文,嘿嘿