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请你根据以下提示的内容,用英语写一篇80个词左右的短文.

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请你根据以下提示的内容,用英语写一篇80个词左右的短文.
1.我因为喜欢音乐、唱歌,所以最喜欢音乐课.
2.我参加了学校的音乐俱乐部,结交了许多朋友;俱乐部里有许多音乐小组;我们经常在放学后一起练唱,有时在学校的音乐节上演唱.
3.我喜欢那些自己写词、谱曲的歌手.
4.我喜欢安静,不能忍受太吵的音乐,喜欢传统音乐.
注意:
1.使用定语从句.
2.语言规范、字迹工整、意思完整.
80词,80分.你的!
请你根据以下提示的内容,用英语写一篇80个词左右的短文.
I love music and singing. That's why I like music classes. I have joined the school's music club and made a lot of friends. There are many music groups in our school music club. I am in one of them. We often practice singing after school. Sometimes we perform in the school's music concertss.The music instrument I am playing is XXX, and I am getting better everyday because I am frequently aking part in my music club's activities, which gives me plenty of practice opportunities.
I like those singers who are writing their own music and song lyrics. My favourite singer is XXX. But I also prefer quiet music rather than those too noisy ones. Our school will soon hold another music concert. I am really looking forward to it.

已替你写好了,应该足够80词,希望会令你满意.并望采纳,谢谢.
再问: 好吧,这位高手。其实这作文看起来有点难度的。请问能不能把哪些词句写简单点的?其实我英语水平只能算是中等偏下的。麻烦了。
再答: 其实这些词已经是很显浅的了,无法再用更简单的代替。但我可以把一些较长天认为你可能会有难度的,加上中文翻译好吗? I love music and singing. That's why I like music classes. I have joined the school's music club(乐俱乐部) and made a lot of friends. There are many music groups in our school music club. I am in one of them. We often practice (练习) singing after school. Sometimes we perform(表演) in the school's music concerts(音乐会).The music instrument(乐器) I am playing is XXX, and I am getting better everyday because I am frequently(很常) taking part in my music club's activities(活动), which gives me plenty of practice(练习) opportunities(机会). I like those singers who are writing their own music and song lyrics(歌词). My favourite(最喜欢的) singer is XXX. But I also prefer (较喜欢) quiet music rather than (而不是) those too noisy ones. Our school will soon hold another music concert. I am really looking forward(在期望著) to it. 若还有不明的请继续问罢。
再问: 嗯嗯,还真有点疑问 The music instrument I am playing is XXX, and I am getting better everyday because I am frequently aking part in my music club's activities, which gives me plenty of practice opportunities这段能不能换成别的简单点的句子呢? 还有就是下一段中的prefe..rather than 我们只学prefer to do sth,这个能不能改下 还有结尾,看不懂。求帮忙,帮忙帮到底 采纳后我会多加50分的,谢谢
再答: I play piano and I am getting better and better because the school music club gives me a lot fo chances to practice. I prefer quiet music and I don't like noisy ones. 我比较喜欢柔和音乐而不爱嘈吵的音乐。 Our school will soon hold another music concert. I am really looking forward to it. 我们学校快要举行一个音乐会,我真的急不及待它的到临。 还可以吗?若还是有难度,请尽管继续问。