我自己写的一篇英语文章,请高手帮我看看哪儿有不妥的地方~

我自己写的一篇英语文章,请高手帮我看看哪儿有不妥的地方~
A significant proverb for me~
There is a proverb---I fear nothing in the face of adversity,because there's no adversity in my dictionery,and what is more,I don't have a dictionery.
U may amused by this proverb by merely taking the first glimpse.But I think dig out some useful idels and tips from this classical proverb is essential for me.I've to analyse this sentence again and again in order to capture some inspirations though it's a bit tough.
Everyone has his or her own living way and living style.Both of them are protected under the promission of legal.Everbody is living individually but they couldn't be isolated or aparted from the others coz the society is consisted by variouty kinds of inhabitants with deep conjunctions.So conmunication of all aspects in daily life are inevitable,and we must occur that conmunicate efficiently is an goal that we shoul chase after.But not everything could be under your control well,some unpredicted things like obstacles on your way to success.So we must try our best to deal with it well as we can to minimize the negative factors.So we must be frequently immersed in the environment of conmunication.And we must advocate " every day is learning day" I got this form one of my net friends.It's also meanful for me in any cases.We can infer from this saying that in order to cut down some inaccuracy in some unfamiliar situations,we must never stop the steps of studing.
In a man's whole life,he must be involved in much adversities.But how we can defeat them Shall we compromise I'll tell myself instantly - No~Under no circumstanse will I compromise~We must believe that we can overcome all these adversities by keeping faith.Because our motivation are subordinate to our faith.
At last I wanna cite an advertice message - impossible is noting~

里面是有不少错,不过1楼改了以后错误就更多了,