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英语作文Online shopping 求高手帮我改好一点，我英文太差了。大致不变。
online shopping
Nowdays，online shopping is the most popular way of shopping，in the daily life .
The reasons why it is more popular than other ways of shopping are down to these.
Firstly,it can save time and must be convenient. we can also buy things that we can't find in the life.
Secondly, the most important thing to the commen people is the money .we can also compare the price ,then ,decide to buy it or not.
inaddition onlineshopping can make secret to yourself .
However,every coin has two sides.
In my pinions, you must improve awareness of safty regradless of the profit we have got.It may be insucure, because the chinese believe what we have seen is the reality. if we buy clothes,a pair of jeans,we always find that the size and the colour are not satisfied with what we have seen before.We should also pay the money for the express,and wait several days for the goods.
All of these,I advise that we should buy commen things in the reality mostly,and choose to buy the strange goods online.
改后字数大概也就那么多，如果有语法错误也麻烦帮我改了，顺便给我这篇作文给点意见，有那些方面需要加强的，直接留言在这里。改后的文章，请发到1178299534@qq.com写明备注，别放在“知道”。我好及时给好评呢。
online shopping
Nowdays，online shopping is the most popular way of shopping，in the daily life .
The reasons why it is more popular than other ways of shopping are down to these.
Firstly,it can save time and must be convenient. we can also buy things that we can't find in the life.
Secondly, the most important thing to the commen people is the money .we can also compare the price ,then ,decide to buy it or not.
inaddition onlineshopping can make secret to yourself .
However,every coin has two sides.
In my pinions, you must improve awareness of safty regradless of the profit we have got.It may be insucure, because the chinese believe what we have seen is the reality. if we buy clothes,a pair of jeans,we always find that the size and the colour are not satisfied with what we have seen before.We should also pay the money for the express,and wait several days for the goods.
All of these,I advise that we should buy commen things in the reality mostly,and choose to buy the strange goods online.
改后字数大概也就那么多，如果有语法错误也麻烦帮我改了，顺便给我这篇作文给点意见，有那些方面需要加强的，直接留言在这里。改后的文章，请发到1178299534@qq.com写明备注，别放在“知道”。我好及时给好评呢。
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