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While some people claim that a person's essential qualities are inherited at birth,others hold that the circumstances in which a person grows up are mainly responsible for the type of he/she later becomes.

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ESSENTIAL QUALITIES:INHERITED OR NOT?
While an increasing number of experts are beginning to study the people’s personalities,an Chinese old saying,man’s nature at birth is good,has became the oldest evidence to surport that our essential qualities are inherited from parents.However,the fact is that not everyone bacome a winner and the rising level of crime has became such a sign in present day society.In my opinion,what kind of person we become is depend on our families,educations,social backgrouds but not the genes from our parents.
First,what kind of family we born in determines how we grow up.Statistics indicated that the alternatives to traditional nuclear families,such as single parents families and stepfamilies,are less satisfactory for the mental health of the children.Even if a child,has a politician father,once his/her mother left or die,he/she may easily become taciturn and pessimistic.
Second,what kind of education we receive devtermines what personalities we acquint.When it comes to education,the majority of people believe that a person’s education is the most important aspect of one’s life.A positive studing environment provide us more opportunities to shape the confident,diligent and optimictic charaters.A latest survey among 50 sets of twins shows that even they share the common genes with their sisters and brothers,they are not susually hold the same interestings.They get different jobs which linked to their various educations.
Last,what kind of society backgrounds we live in determines what kind of person we can finally become.As and old saying goes,the times produce their heros.When we look back to the pioneering age in the early years of America,quit a few heros who defy difficulties and who dare to explore new ground jump into our mind.As the core of Chinese traditional culture,however,confucianism influenced a large number of Chinese who are modest and amiable,which will easily developed to a kind of servile during the previous war years.
From what is said above,our essential qualities are determined by the families,educations and our social backgrounds.Although some investigations point out the importance role of genes,there’s no delying the fact that the circumstances we grow up are more influencial to our qualities shaping.In view of these important impacts,we should learm how to seek good and avoid disadvantages,it will not only help to strenghen our personalities,but also do benefit for our country and the society.