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请高手帮我看看我的作文 谢谢啦
You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.
Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your name at the end of the letter; use Li Ming instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)
To whom it may concern,
Last week, I saw a article on Project Hope which described children who live in rural places have no money to go to school. I was greatly moved by it , I think, although I am a common student in an university, but I’d like to take 300-400 yuan per month to help one of these kind of child.
So please help me to choose one candidate. My requirements are as followed:
1. She must be a girl who ought to in a junior school.
2. She ought to like and good at English, for that we can have some common language .
3. Her family must be real poverty and really need someone’s help.
I will try my best to support her to finish hers study!
Sincerely yours
Li Mling
You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.
Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your name at the end of the letter; use Li Ming instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)
To whom it may concern,
Last week, I saw a article on Project Hope which described children who live in rural places have no money to go to school. I was greatly moved by it , I think, although I am a common student in an university, but I’d like to take 300-400 yuan per month to help one of these kind of child.
So please help me to choose one candidate. My requirements are as followed:
1. She must be a girl who ought to in a junior school.
2. She ought to like and good at English, for that we can have some common language .
3. Her family must be real poverty and really need someone’s help.
I will try my best to support her to finish hers study!
Sincerely yours
Li Mling
应该没什么错误,照语法来看.不过我的水平还不是很好.不能太帮上忙,你找别人再看看吧.