这是我写的英语读后感 请各位大师帮忙看看有没有什么语法错误

这是我写的英语读后感 请各位大师帮忙看看有没有什么语法错误
Reading after Aladdin’s lamp
This holiday,I read a book named “Aladdin and the Enchanted Lamp”.It is a famous fairy tale written by an English author named Judith Dean.It tells us a story about how a “good-for-nothing” man becomes to a rich man by an enchanted lamp.
The story is like this:When Aladdin was a boy,he just wants to play.He talked and laughed and played with his friends all day.
By chance,he got the enchanted lamp from a magician named Abanazar.And used it to get food and money.Soon,Aladdin and his mother were very rich.
Five years later,he married the Sultan’s daughter.They lived very happily.
But soon,Abanazar came back and deceived the lamp from the princess.And snatched the palace and the princess.But Aladdin rescued the princess and took the lamp away.Afterwards,Aladdin and his princess lived happily
I think,Aladdin is really a bad boy.He is so lazy and did not do any work.His mother always says to him:“You are a lazy boy!”Yes,Aladdin is really lazy.But in our real life,we can’t do the things like Aladdin.Everybody has many wishes,but we can’t just want to find short ways.We should believe ourselves.We should work hard by ourselves.If we just want to rely on others,we will be good-for-nothing.So believe ourselves,we’re the jinnee of ourselves.

错误比较多,建议从新写!
读后感是Thoughts on Reading
enchanted lamp 建议改为 a lamp with tremendous magical power
He talked and laughed and played with his friends all day.建议改为 He was playing tricks with his friends every day.
By chance 建议改为By an accidental chance
were very rich 建议改为 were getting rich.