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请就"Friiday News Hour”谈谈你的看法。 要求：不低于80词，语句通畅，讲明自己的观点和理由。 Dear classmates, Our monitor suggests that we have "Friday News Hour".I think that it's a good idea. Everyone knows that we are busy all day.Seldom do we konw what is happening both at home and abroad, let alone what we can do for our class.By reading newspaper we can get more information about the world outside.So I think "Friday News Hour" can broaden our mind and enrich our school life. I'm sure everone will benefit a lot from this activity. February 7th,2012
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解题过程：
Dear classmates, Our monitor suggests that we have "Friday News Hour".I think that it's a good idea. Everyone knows that we are busy all day. Seldom do we know what is happening both at home and abroad, let alone what we can do for our class. By reading newspapers we can get more information about the world outside. So I think "Friday News Hour" can broaden our mind and enrich our school life. I'm sure everyone will benefit a lot from this activity. February 7th,2012
如果是发言稿的话，就不需要日期，最后一般加上Thanks for your listening.
如果是书信，一般要把日期写在右上角
这篇文章写的很好，语句通顺，结构合理，条理清楚
同学：不知这样的解答你能否满意，如有不同意见，请在下面的继续讨论中留言好吗？拾贝老师愿意与你再次进行亲切的交流。匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。祝：学习不断进步，开心每一天！
最终答案：略
解题过程：
Dear classmates, Our monitor suggests that we have "Friday News Hour".I think that it's a good idea. Everyone knows that we are busy all day. Seldom do we know what is happening both at home and abroad, let alone what we can do for our class. By reading newspapers we can get more information about the world outside. So I think "Friday News Hour" can broaden our mind and enrich our school life. I'm sure everyone will benefit a lot from this activity. February 7th,2012
如果是发言稿的话，就不需要日期，最后一般加上Thanks for your listening.
如果是书信，一般要把日期写在右上角
这篇文章写的很好，语句通顺，结构合理，条理清楚
同学：不知这样的解答你能否满意，如有不同意见，请在下面的继续讨论中留言好吗？拾贝老师愿意与你再次进行亲切的交流。匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。祝：学习不断进步，开心每一天！
最终答案：略