百度作业网求英语学霸解答这段话有没有错误?
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求英语学霸解答这段话有没有错误?
This term is going to end.And Christmas Day comes again.In the special day,I want to say:"Merry Christmas!"
And,time is flying fast, right?Now you have been teaching us for a long time.But do you know?I still remember that when I heard that my old teacher would not teach me,I felt very unhappy.However,when I met you,I found my school life is still colorful!“Perhaps she can bring me more.”I thought.And a few weeks later,I knew I was right.I fell I am becoming better and better.Because of you,I get more knowledge.So,thank you for teaching me!
Last,I hope we can stay with each other longer.I also want you to be happier and happier!
Best wishes to you!
This term is going to end.And Christmas Day comes again.In the special day,I want to say:"Merry Christmas!"
And,time is flying fast, right?Now you have been teaching us for a long time.But do you know?I still remember that when I heard that my old teacher would not teach me,I felt very unhappy.However,when I met you,I found my school life is still colorful!“Perhaps she can bring me more.”I thought.And a few weeks later,I knew I was right.I fell I am becoming better and better.Because of you,I get more knowledge.So,thank you for teaching me!
Last,I hope we can stay with each other longer.I also want you to be happier and happier!
Best wishes to you!
Generally very good,except the followings:
I would rather use "In this special day,..." instead of "In the special day,..."
When we quote sayings,we seldom use colon [:]. Just use [ I want to say "Merry ...]
"Last,..." should be "Lastly,..."
I would rather use "In this special day,..." instead of "In the special day,..."
When we quote sayings,we seldom use colon [:]. Just use [ I want to say "Merry ...]
"Last,..." should be "Lastly,..."