百度作业网英语短文改错 明天就要 一共10处错
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英语短文改错 明天就要 一共10处错
Dear Ms Taylor
Football is my favourite sport when it is comes to football I always have much to saying.Recently I often quarreled with my mother about if i could play football with my classmates at weekends.My mother holds the view strong that I should devote all my spare time to study all the subjects well.In her opinion only when I try my best to study I be able to admitted to an university.But I really can`t accept her view.As far as I amconcerned,playing football not only.build up my strength and makes me full of energy evergy every day.could you give me some advices on how to persuade my mother to allow me play football at weekends?
Dear Ms Taylor
Football is my favourite sport when it is comes to football I always have much to saying.Recently I often quarreled with my mother about if i could play football with my classmates at weekends.My mother holds the view strong that I should devote all my spare time to study all the subjects well.In her opinion only when I try my best to study I be able to admitted to an university.But I really can`t accept her view.As far as I amconcerned,playing football not only.build up my strength and makes me full of energy evergy every day.could you give me some advices on how to persuade my mother to allow me play football at weekends?
1.when it is comes 中去掉is
2.much to saying中的saying改成say
3.quarreled 改成quarrel
4.about if i could 中的if改成whether
5.strong 改成strongly
6.only when I try my best改成only when I had tried my best
7.be able to 改成can,另外把can放在I的前面
8.playing football not only.build up my strength and makes me full of energy evergy every day.改成Not only do playing football build up my strength,but also make me full of energy every day.
9.some advices 改成some advice
10.allow me play 改成allow me to play
2.much to saying中的saying改成say
3.quarreled 改成quarrel
4.about if i could 中的if改成whether
5.strong 改成strongly
6.only when I try my best改成only when I had tried my best
7.be able to 改成can,另外把can放在I的前面
8.playing football not only.build up my strength and makes me full of energy evergy every day.改成Not only do playing football build up my strength,but also make me full of energy every day.
9.some advices 改成some advice
10.allow me play 改成allow me to play