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(满分25分）假设你是校刊英文版的编辑，请你根据下面表格中的内容写一篇题目为“Top Meal of the Day’的文章登在校刊上。现状许多高中学生不吃早餐（skip breakfast），其结果不仅影响白天的学习，而且导致身体变差。原因1. 认为早餐不重要，可有可无；2. 早晨时间匆忙，为了节省时间不吃早餐；3. 女孩为了减肥而不吃早餐。建议每位学生都应该每天吃早餐。原因…(自定，至少两个)要求：按要求使文章内容充实，上下文连贯通顺；词数：120
There are a lots of problems about meal of the day in senior school's students.Many of them skip breakfast.the results are not only effect their studies,but also lead to the body worse.I think,the reason for that it's they think the breakfast is not vital,whatever have or not.Moreover,the time is not rich.For save times to skip breakfast.What's more,also reason for wants to be thin for some girls.Aim at theis.otherwise,I advice that every students should have breakfast each day for our health , improve our grade and have a enjoy learning life.
There are a lots of problems about meal of the day in senior school's students.Many of them skip breakfast.the results are not only effect their studies,but also lead to the body worse.I think,the reason for that it's they think the breakfast is not vital,whatever have or not.Moreover,the time is not rich.For save times to skip breakfast.What's more,also reason for wants to be thin for some girls.Aim at theis.otherwise,I advice that every students should have breakfast each day for our health , improve our grade and have a enjoy learning life.
解题思路： 解答如下
解题过程：
同学,我给你的文章以10分制打分为6分
修改如下:
第一行:lots-lot ;senior school's--Senior School;
第二行:boby--bobys; reason--reasons ; it's--is
第三行:save--saving; times-time
第四行:wants--wanting ; theis--this;去掉otherwise
第五行:students--student; our--their; improve 之前加in order to ;have--has
文章最后还可以多写一些关于吃早餐的好处.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
同学,我给你的文章以10分制打分为6分
修改如下:
第一行:lots-lot ;senior school's--Senior School;
第二行:boby--bobys; reason--reasons ; it's--is
第三行:save--saving; times-time
第四行:wants--wanting ; theis--this;去掉otherwise
第五行:students--student; our--their; improve 之前加in order to ;have--has
文章最后还可以多写一些关于吃早餐的好处.
最终答案：略