英语翻译Letter to Editor of TV WeeklyDear Sir/Madam,I read Aliso

英语翻译
Letter to Editor of TV Weekly
Dear Sir/Madam,
I read Alison Burnham’s review of When we were 12,and I do not agree with her.I thought the programme was wonderful-I found the old news pictures really interesting-they helped to bring to life the stories the people were telling.
The programme reminds me of many things from my own childhood.For example,one day when I was about five,I was going to school on the bus by myself（this was the late 1960s）.My mother had given me exactly the right money for a return ticket.I held out my hand with the money in it-one big coin on top of one little coin.The bus conductor took the big top coin only and she gave me a ticket,but it was a pink one for a single journey.I needed a white one for a return journey,but I was too frightend to say anything.When school finished for the day,I couldn’t catch the bus home-I had to walk.As a grown-up,whenever I’ve been in a situation where I need to say something or take some action,this early memory of my bus ride comes back to me,and I’m able to take control of the situation.
I would like to say to the director,Bret Chrysler,carry on making this kind of programme.Too much TV these days is quiz shows and so-called“reality programmes.”I appreciate the human story that can make me laugh and cry.
Your faithfully,
Chris Daniels
求人工高水平翻译，那是一种最高的境界的享受！

看见机器翻译的就蛋疼,鄙视啊鄙视,
这是我自己一个字一个字码的,不容易啊
致《电视周刊》编辑的信
敬爱的先生/女士：
我读了艾莉森·伯纳姆（Alison Burnham）写的关于《当我们12岁》节目的评论,我不同意她的观点.我认为这个节目非常棒——我发现老新闻照片真的很有趣——它们有助于让人们讲述的故事变得栩栩如生.
这个节目让我回想起了我童年时的许多事情.例如,我5岁时的某一天,我要自己乘巴士去学校（当时是上世纪60年代末）.我的母亲给了我正好够返程车票的钱.我把钱递了出去——一枚大硬币和一枚小硬币.售票员只拿了那枚大硬币,就给了我一张票.但那是一张粉色的单程车票.我需要白色的返程车票,但我实在太害怕,以至于一声也没吭.在学校上完课后,我无法搭巴士回家——我只能走回去.现在我长大了,每当我处于需要站出来说话或采取行动的情形时,我脑海里都会浮现出这段儿时的乘巴士记忆,然后我就能够控制住局面.（言下之意该说话说话,该行动行动）
我想对节目导演布莱特·克莱斯勒（Bret Chrysler）说,请继续制作这类节目.如今太多电视节目都是问答比赛节目和所谓的“现实节目”.我欣赏的是让我能放声大笑和放声大哭的人间故事.
此致
克里斯·丹尼尔斯（Chris Daniels）