百度作业网初二英语作文求批改!看看有没有语法上的错误!
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初二英语作文求批改!看看有没有语法上的错误!
I often went to the movie theatre in the past.I used to like to watch movies at the movie theatre,because I thought it's very interesting and it can help me relax.But now I hate watching movies at the theatre,because I think it's very boring.Last year,I went to the movie theatre to watch movies with my girlfriend.I spent 300 yuan to watch movies with her.We spent a whole day watching them,but my girlfriend was unhappy.She thought these movies are very boring.I got very sad.After that,I didn't pay any at attention to movies and I didn't went to the movie theatre!
请指出错误与不足之处!谢谢!
I often went to the movie theatre in the past.I used to like to watch movies at the movie theatre,because I thought it's very interesting and it can help me relax.But now I hate watching movies at the theatre,because I think it's very boring.Last year,I went to the movie theatre to watch movies with my girlfriend.I spent 300 yuan to watch movies with her.We spent a whole day watching them,but my girlfriend was unhappy.She thought these movies are very boring.I got very sad.After that,I didn't pay any at attention to movies and I didn't went to the movie theatre!
请指出错误与不足之处!谢谢!
第一句,用in the past改成at.第二句,at the movie theater 改成 in,第三句it's 用过去式,can用过去时改成could,第六句改成spend...on doing sth,没有spend sometime to do 这种表达,第九句改成过去式,She thought these movies were.,最后一句pay any attention(把at 去掉）还有最有一句时态怎么怪怪的- -改成现在时会好点吧...