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My School Rulds
Now,I'm in a new school.In the morning.I have to arrive at school on time and clean the classroom. We can't eat in the hallways but can eat in the classroom.We also can't listen to music in the classroom. After school.We have to get home quickly .Because we have much homework to do.
Do you think we have many rules？And they are too strict.But I have to obey then.I know they are good for me
有关一篇学校的规则的文章
Now,I'm in a new school.In the morning.I have to arrive at school on time and clean the classroom. We can't eat in the hallways but can eat in the classroom.We also can't listen to music in the classroom. After school.We have to get home quickly .Because we have much homework to do.
Do you think we have many rules？And they are too strict.But I have to obey then.I know they are good for me
有关一篇学校的规则的文章
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解题过程：
My School Rulds (Rules)
Now,I'm in a new school.In the morning.I have to arrive at school on time and clean the classroom. We can't eat in the hallways but we can eat in the classroom.①We also can't listen to music in the classroom. After school.We have to②get home quickly .Because we have much homework to do.
Do you think we have many rules？And they are too strict. But I have to obey then(them).I know they are good for me
句①改为：We can’t listen to music in the classroom, either. 否定句中的“也”用“either”。
also和too是用在肯定句中的“也”。
句②改为：go home。
放学后，我们必须尽快的“回家”（赶紧回家做作业）。而不是“到家”。
另外，注意单词的拼写。
短文写的很高，语言简练，通顺。没有语法错误。继续努力！
最终答案：略
解题过程：
My School Rulds (Rules)
Now,I'm in a new school.In the morning.I have to arrive at school on time and clean the classroom. We can't eat in the hallways but we can eat in the classroom.①We also can't listen to music in the classroom. After school.We have to②get home quickly .Because we have much homework to do.
Do you think we have many rules？And they are too strict. But I have to obey then(them).I know they are good for me
句①改为：We can’t listen to music in the classroom, either. 否定句中的“也”用“either”。
also和too是用在肯定句中的“也”。
句②改为：go home。
放学后，我们必须尽快的“回家”（赶紧回家做作业）。而不是“到家”。
另外，注意单词的拼写。
短文写的很高，语言简练，通顺。没有语法错误。继续努力！
最终答案：略