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关于音乐的.I LIKE MUSIC If there's one thing that can always shar

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关于音乐的.
I LIKE MUSIC If there's one thing that can always share my joys and sadness,I think it's music.It seems that every song is a real friend,they always talk to me,with their heart.They can always make me forget everything except it.When I'm unhappy,when I felt the sadness are around me,there's just the music can get into my world and tell me so many things.I can hear they say"There're no boundaries",I can also hear they croon"The last wedts"and "Conon".They're all really beautiful songs.Their voices make me lose myself in the beautiful world.I can forget anything to get into them to feel what they feel.There're are so many songs about the growth,the love and the nature.I think I really have learnt so many from them.This competion is for my friends,thank them for always going with me on my way.So,I want to say that"It's not goodbye"!有些句子我觉得有点奇怪,Thank you!
关于音乐的.I LIKE MUSIC If there's one thing that can always shar
when I felt the sadness are around me 用is好点吧,sadness好像不可数 Their voices make me lose myself in the beautiful world 用voice makes吧 I can forget anything to get into them to feel what they feel 用and连接的话更通顺点 There're are so many songs about the growth 这儿怎么用了两个are?I think I really have learnt so many from them 不用so many,用a lot 或lots of更好点 It's not goodbye 改成It can still go on forever好像通顺点 以上均属个人意见