百度作业网请问这段英语短文有错吗?
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请问这段英语短文有错吗?
How to Train Your Dragon
The story takes place in a mythical Viking world where a young Viking teenager named "Hiccup" desires to follow his tribe's tradition of becoming a dragon slayer.After finally capturing his first dragon,and with his chance at finally gaining the tribe's acceptance,he finds that he no longer has the desire to kill it ,instead it becomes one of his friend.
从网上找的驯龙高手的简介.想用到作文里,又怕有错.T_T.
How to Train Your Dragon
The story takes place in a mythical Viking world where a young Viking teenager named "Hiccup" desires to follow his tribe's tradition of becoming a dragon slayer.After finally capturing his first dragon,and with his chance at finally gaining the tribe's acceptance,he finds that he no longer has the desire to kill it ,instead it becomes one of his friend.
从网上找的驯龙高手的简介.想用到作文里,又怕有错.T_T.
下面语法错误我为你改了：
How to Train Your Dragon
The story took place in a mythical Viking world where a young Viking teenager named "Hiccup" desired to follow his tribe's tradition of becoming a dragon slayer. After capturing his first dragon and winning a chance at finally gaining the tribe's acceptance, he found that he no longer had the desire to kill it. Instead, the dragon became one of his friends.
特别指出,第二句首一个 finally 除掉是因为同一句子有两个 finally 单词.
满意请采纳,谢谢.
How to Train Your Dragon
The story took place in a mythical Viking world where a young Viking teenager named "Hiccup" desired to follow his tribe's tradition of becoming a dragon slayer. After capturing his first dragon and winning a chance at finally gaining the tribe's acceptance, he found that he no longer had the desire to kill it. Instead, the dragon became one of his friends.
特别指出,第二句首一个 finally 除掉是因为同一句子有两个 finally 单词.
满意请采纳,谢谢.