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请问这段英文错在哪里,我应该怎样改.
上面所说的协商过程是解决矛盾争议的必须遵循的步骤.对这位想通过协商程序解决劳动争议的来自不列颠的员工,只要他按照这个协商的步骤与企业进行集体协商,我相信是可以得到很好的结果.通过这样协商,劳资双方可以和平的解决争议,同时也减少解决劳资纠纷的成本,减少人力物力时间的支出.
The negotiation procedure mentioned above is the indispensable step so as to settle the conflicts.I think it can get the best results if the employee who comes from Great Britain followed this procedure to collective negotiate with corporation.It can offering a peaceful atmosphere for dispute resolution,both parties do not amicable and not losing face; It helps to resolve contradictions within a short period of time; It can not only minimize the cost of resolving disputes but also reduce manpower,material resources and time spend.
请问这段英文错在哪里,我应该怎样改.
The process of negotiation to resolve the contradiction dispute must follow the
steps.On the thinking through the consultation process to resolve labor disputes
from the British staff,as long as he is in accordance with the consultation of
the steps and enterprise conduct collective negotiation,I believe it can get
very good results.Through such consultation,both sides can be peaceful
settlement of disputes,but also reduce the cost of resolving labor disputes,
reduce manpower time expenditure.
翻译成这样吧,你翻译的是这样的↓
谈判程序上面提到的是必不可少的步骤,以解决冲突.我认为它可以得到最好的结果,如果员工来自于英国遵循这一程序,集体谈判与公司.它可以提供一个和平的气氛来解决争端,双方不友好、不丢面子;它有助于化解矛盾在很短的时间内;它不仅可以减少成本,解决纠纷,但也减少人力,物力和时间花费