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Ladies and Gentlemen , Good afternoon! Irm very glad to stand here and give you a short speech. today my topic is "Life". And I hope you will like it ,
Man's life is a process of growing up, actually I'm standing here is a growth. If a personrs life must be constituted by various choices, then I grow up along with these choices. Once I hope I can study in a high school in future, however that's passed, as you know I come here, and now I wonder what the future holds for me.
When I come to this school, I told to myself: this my near future, all starts here. Following I will learn to become a man, an integrated man, who has a fine body, can take on important task, has independent thought, an open mind, intensive thought, and has the ability to judge right and wrong,you know ,it's a perfect man and it's my goal.
Once my teacher said :" you are not sewing, you are stylist; never forget which you should lay out to people is your thought, not craft." I will put my personality with my interest and ability into my study, during these process I will combine learning with doing. If I can achieve this "future", I think that I really grow up. And I deeply believe kindred, good-fellowship and love will be perfect and I'll be happy in the future.
How to say future? Maybe it's a nice wish. Lets make up our minds, stick to it and surely well enjoy our life. that's all thank you 希望老师可以纠正一下语法错误， 并且美化一下文章 读起来可以更好听 顺口
Man's life is a process of growing up, actually I'm standing here is a growth. If a personrs life must be constituted by various choices, then I grow up along with these choices. Once I hope I can study in a high school in future, however that's passed, as you know I come here, and now I wonder what the future holds for me.
When I come to this school, I told to myself: this my near future, all starts here. Following I will learn to become a man, an integrated man, who has a fine body, can take on important task, has independent thought, an open mind, intensive thought, and has the ability to judge right and wrong,you know ,it's a perfect man and it's my goal.
Once my teacher said :" you are not sewing, you are stylist; never forget which you should lay out to people is your thought, not craft." I will put my personality with my interest and ability into my study, during these process I will combine learning with doing. If I can achieve this "future", I think that I really grow up. And I deeply believe kindred, good-fellowship and love will be perfect and I'll be happy in the future.
How to say future? Maybe it's a nice wish. Lets make up our minds, stick to it and surely well enjoy our life. that's all thank you 希望老师可以纠正一下语法错误， 并且美化一下文章 读起来可以更好听 顺口
解题思路： 语法是否正确，语言是否流畅，内容是否全面、文章是否连贯。
解题过程：
Ladies and Gentlemen,
Good afternoon! I’m very glad to stand here and give you a short speech. Today my topic is "Life". And I hope you will like it ,
Man's life is a process of growing up, actually I'm standing here is a growth. If a person’s life must be constituted by various choices, then I grow up along with these choices. Once I hope I can study in a high school in future, however that's passed, as you know I come here, and now I wonder what the future holds for me.
When I came to this school, I told （to去掉） myself: this is my near future, all starts here. In the following days I will learn to become a man, an integrated man, who has a fine body, can take on important tasks , has independent thought, an open mind, intensive thought, and has the ability to judge right and wrong,you know ,it's a perfect man and it's my goal.
Once my teacher said :" you are not a sewer, you are a stylist; never forget what you should lay out to people is your thought, not craft." I will put my personality with my interest and ability into my study, during these process I will combine learning with doing. If I achieve this "future", I think that I will really grow up to be a man . And I deeply believe kindred, good-fellowship and love will be perfect and I'll be happy in the future.
How to say future? Maybe it's a nice wish. Let’s make up our minds, stick to it and surely well enjoy our life.
That's all
Thank you for your listening !
最终答案：略
解题过程：
Ladies and Gentlemen,
Good afternoon! I’m very glad to stand here and give you a short speech. Today my topic is "Life". And I hope you will like it ,
Man's life is a process of growing up, actually I'm standing here is a growth. If a person’s life must be constituted by various choices, then I grow up along with these choices. Once I hope I can study in a high school in future, however that's passed, as you know I come here, and now I wonder what the future holds for me.
When I came to this school, I told （to去掉） myself: this is my near future, all starts here. In the following days I will learn to become a man, an integrated man, who has a fine body, can take on important tasks , has independent thought, an open mind, intensive thought, and has the ability to judge right and wrong,you know ,it's a perfect man and it's my goal.
Once my teacher said :" you are not a sewer, you are a stylist; never forget what you should lay out to people is your thought, not craft." I will put my personality with my interest and ability into my study, during these process I will combine learning with doing. If I achieve this "future", I think that I will really grow up to be a man . And I deeply believe kindred, good-fellowship and love will be perfect and I'll be happy in the future.
How to say future? Maybe it's a nice wish. Let’s make up our minds, stick to it and surely well enjoy our life.
That's all
Thank you for your listening !
最终答案：略